Alriiiiiiiiiiight critique time!
Ringo Akai - Bree : Pretty good, you definitely fit the character, but that's pretty obvious lol. I feel like a couple of your lines in the beginning were a tad awkwardly delivered, like "I thought that Morino-kun's ability..." sounded a little weird, not because of the pause, (that's obviously beyond your control) but something about it struck me as odd. I think the pacing of the lines made them difficult, but you did pretty damn good with em anyway. (I loved your "staaaaaaaare" xD)
Ryouko Okami - Mizura : Awesome. I loved the voice, and your delivery sounded great to me. The only little nitpick I'd say I have was your annunciation during the line that said like "in the alley when I was attacked..." It sounded just a little off, but it was totally fine because everything else was good, great job!
Liszt Kiriki - InstraClassic : Something about this character struck me as flamboyant when I first saw him, but your performance made me think completely otherwise xD I really dug the calm, cool, and collected delivery you gave. I liked it a lot!
Alice Kiriki - Monotori : Beautiful. The best one in the clip by far. xD You didn't have much in this clip, so I look forward to future clips where you may say more so I can properly critique you!
Otsuu Tsurugaya - Chinomi : Not too many lines from you either, but a few more than Alice. I liked what you were doing with the character, she seemed very sweet and soft-spoken. The "I'll be right back" sounded just a bit less enthusiastic than I expected. Other than that, I liked it, but hopefully we'll see you in more of these clips too so I can critique you better!
Ryoushi Morino - Me : To be perfectly honest, I'm very satisfied with this. I feel like I gave my best and I think it showed, at least to an extent. My couple of nitpicks are as follows: my "Yes ma'am." Didn't sound as disappointed or down as I think it should have; and I feel like I could hear a bit of mic distortion on my louder lines because of the environment I was recording in and how I used noise removal. Yuck. I'll try to fix that in future clips~!
Overall: I liked watching this a lot, it was a silly scene that definitely feels like the set up scene for a series. (Which im sure it is xD) I had fun working on these lines, and I think the clip came together very well. As I love to say, the mixing must have been awesome, because I didn't think about it the entire time. <3
