TrivialSerenity's - 2010 Demo Reel

[Trivial Serenity]

This is my first Demo Reel.

DEMO REEL 2010

Comments and thoughts greatly appreciated.

*WARNING SUGGESTIVE LANGUAGE*

[SonicTheVA]

To be honest, I thought the demo reel was pretty decent. I think you need to put in more emotions and energy in your lines. I also felt that the last line was a bit too vulgur for my taste. I found that the "f-word" and the "s-word" were unnecessary and they don't need to be in any demo reel, in my opinion. I'm not saying don't swear at all. You could at least use different words like "damn" and "hell" as replacements for the strong words. Try to make your demo reel a bit more "kid-friendly". The reason why I'm saying this is because some people (even adults) may find swearing offensive and they could stop listening to the demo reel halfway through.

I'm sorry if I'm being harsh but I thought that this should be said. And try to throw in more serious lines in your demo reel so you could concentrate on your acting a bit more. Other than that, good attempt!

[Trivial Serenity]

Thanks, and I can't beleive I forgot to put a warning

[misterunix]

Your demo failed to load 3 times for me... FYI.

[Trivial Serenity]

4shared seems to have been not loading properly for awhile now, I searched up other uploads by other people and It hadn't been loading. I don't know what the problem is. It works fine for me right now, Maybe it doesn't work certain times of the day?