Judge: A Horror Radio Play

[kagutaba]

http://www.4shared.com/audio/0AsFPp4...e_Prologue.htm

Credits
Voices, Script and Editing
Kagutaba (Kat)

SFX
The Freesound Project
Sound Dogs

Music
Opening: Kiss by Midnight Syndicate
Ending: Are You Sleeping by November Project

Photoshop
Font: dafont.com
Brushes: Obsidian Dawn

Hey, my first radio play! Any and all critique is welcome, as long as it's not flames, of course. Thanks everybody!
I also made a journal for it for those interested: http://judgeplay.livejournal.com/profile
You can leave questions/comments/suggestions/critique there, too. I'd also be posting random info there about it. Thank you for your time everyone!

[Soulgig]

Okay time to critic this. While it's nice there were a few problems.

1. I think a 1:00 minute opening is a bit long. It drags and I was getting bored by the time it ended. Your opening should be short and sweet.

2. The thinking inside your head effect. It sounds more like your talking down a pipe or something. I don't know what program you use but there should be just an echo effect or something. I think this is one of the major problems i see in both Visual and Audio is that when they do a sound effect like that it always is too much.

I think that's all I really saw. A good start just keep it up!

[kagutaba]

1. I see what you mean. I'll shorten it for future episodes. Or I might go back and reupload this with a shorter version.

2. I see what you mean on that. I use Adobe Audition, and for future episodes I'll play with the echo feature instead. I still have a lot to learn about churning out a nice project!

Thank you so much!

[kagutaba]

Bumpin' this up a bit!