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  1. #1 Judge: A Horror Radio Play 
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    http://www.4shared.com/audio/0AsFPp4...e_Prologue.htm

    Credits

    Voices, Script and Editing
    Kagutaba (Kat)

    SFX
    The Freesound Project
    Sound Dogs

    Music
    Opening: Kiss by Midnight Syndicate
    Ending: Are You Sleeping by November Project

    Photoshop
    Font: dafont.com
    Brushes: Obsidian Dawn


    Hey, my first radio play! Any and all critique is welcome, as long as it's not flames, of course. Thanks everybody!
    I also made a journal for it for those interested: http://judgeplay.livejournal.com/profile
    You can leave questions/comments/suggestions/critique there, too. I'd also be posting random info there about it. Thank you for your time everyone!
    Last edited by kagutaba; 09-18-2010 at 01:59 PM.
     

  2. #2 Re: Judge: A Horror Radio Play 
    Okay time to critic this. While it's nice there were a few problems.

    1. I think a 1:00 minute opening is a bit long. It drags and I was getting bored by the time it ended. Your opening should be short and sweet.

    2. The thinking inside your head effect. It sounds more like your talking down a pipe or something. I don't know what program you use but there should be just an echo effect or something. I think this is one of the major problems i see in both Visual and Audio is that when they do a sound effect like that it always is too much.

    I think that's all I really saw. A good start just keep it up!
     

  3. #3 Re: Judge: A Horror Radio Play 
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    1. I see what you mean. I'll shorten it for future episodes. Or I might go back and reupload this with a shorter version.

    2. I see what you mean on that. I use Adobe Audition, and for future episodes I'll play with the echo feature instead. I still have a lot to learn about churning out a nice project!

    Thank you so much!
     

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    Bumpin' this up a bit!
     

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