
Originally Posted by
Monotori
Girl, I love you here. Feels really natural to me. (Thinking of Bruce Willis? Eh? Eh?) Daglot Alta, I didn't think you had quite enough energy the whole time, because compared to ElliotSkywalker you sound a little bored sometimes. Maybe that was in the script to sound more relaxed. BUT you definitely committed to the part and I understood the character from your portrayal.
The 'saving animals' part was a little long because there were some seconds where they were just running and I had no idea what was going on until the animal noises came in. It also ended very abruptly; I expected something of a reply from Weston at least or some conclusion. However, the characters were very believable- maybe not so believable that they're all alone somewhere when a tornado hits and confess their love in an underground shelter, but then again I don't live in Tennessee- and the music fit very well.
Wish I had a dream with Bruce Willis... although one time I did fire flaming arrows at geese with this Australian dude after I was captured by Africans on a mountain... try making a scene out of THAT.