Not-So-Secret Crush. (Untitled Scene)

[ElliottSkywalker]

NOT-SO-SECRET CRUSH
Romance/Action/Drama


This scene here was actually based on a dream I had last night. My dream was about me talking to Bruce Willis and him confessing his love to me, but for some reason, in every single dream I have, a tornado HAS to tear through wherever I am. Anyway, so this play (of course I couldn't get Bruce, himself, to do the voice) I asked my good friend, Mr. Daglot Alta to kindly lend his voice over to complete this process! Much appreciate it. I wanted to get this done and out of the way because the dream was bugging the crap out of me this entire day and I had to do something about it. So, here's the basic concept of this play.

Weston, a teenaged boy, is having some "crushing" troubles. He's never actually been in love before, until he meets Lacey, a beautiful girl we meet at the beginning of the play. This whole thing takes place in Tennessee. Weston becomes upset when Lacey almost gives up her life trying to save a calf who is stuck in the mud while the tornado is almost 30 feet away! With quick thinking, Weston dashes over to save the calf and Lacey before they're all doomed. A confession is made that could change everything.

::CAST::
Weston Anderson - Daglot Alta
Lacey Lynn - ElliottSkywalker


http://www.box.net/shared/pzpdtbxcc9



SFX
VAA Library
Store-Bought

MUSIC
Enya - Watermark & Legends of the Fall
Epic Score - Rightful Heir (No Vocals)

[Monotori]

Girl, I love you here. Feels really natural to me. (Thinking of Bruce Willis? Eh? Eh?) Daglot Alta, I didn't think you had quite enough energy the whole time, because compared to ElliotSkywalker you sound a little bored sometimes. Maybe that was in the script to sound more relaxed. BUT you definitely committed to the part and I understood the character from your portrayal.

The 'saving animals' part was a little long because there were some seconds where they were just running and I had no idea what was going on until the animal noises came in. It also ended very abruptly; I expected something of a reply from Weston at least or some conclusion. However, the characters were very believable- maybe not so believable that they're all alone somewhere when a tornado hits and confess their love in an underground shelter, but then again I don't live in Tennessee- and the music fit very well.

Wish I had a dream with Bruce Willis... although one time I did fire flaming arrows at geese with this Australian dude after I was captured by Africans on a mountain... try making a scene out of THAT.

[ElliottSkywalker]

Girl, I love you here. Feels really natural to me. (Thinking of Bruce Willis? Eh? Eh?) Daglot Alta, I didn't think you had quite enough energy the whole time, because compared to ElliotSkywalker you sound a little bored sometimes. Maybe that was in the script to sound more relaxed. BUT you definitely committed to the part and I understood the character from your portrayal.

The 'saving animals' part was a little long because there were some seconds where they were just running and I had no idea what was going on until the animal noises came in. It also ended very abruptly; I expected something of a reply from Weston at least or some conclusion. However, the characters were very believable- maybe not so believable that they're all alone somewhere when a tornado hits and confess their love in an underground shelter, but then again I don't live in Tennessee- and the music fit very well.

Wish I had a dream with Bruce Willis... although one time I did fire flaming arrows at geese with this Australian dude after I was captured by Africans on a mountain... try making a scene out of THAT.

Haha. Only if you want me to! xD

Anyway, thanks for the comment. I was thinking about adding a conclusion, but I was trying to make it sound more realistic like "DON'T TALK JUST MOVE" kinda atmosphere. I was trying to go for a more REALITY scene than a scene from a movie, but then again, it kinda contradicts itself with the natural sounding atmosphere and the confessing of love, which everybody says, "Only happens in movies!" LOL. But thank you so much for the comment! I'm trying to write down all my dreams and piece them together to actually make sense, so hopefully there will be more of these.

And sorry if it sounds so jumbled, I was trying to remember everything that happened in my dream, which was pretty hard considering I didn't even write this one down. lol.

[ElliottSkywalker]

Sliiiight bump.