Man Up! [Finished!]

[Damaru]

I listened to the first part a while ago so I'm gonna miss critiquing some of the roles outside of the mains, sorry! DX

Chloe: You did a very good job at emphasizing her awkwardness, but I think you took it slightly far at times, exaggerating a bit too strongly and bending some enunciation as a result. Perhaps toning the acting down to get the subtleties would work for you in the future. Nonetheless, you displayed a whole range of strong emotions and carried out a lot of great, nervous energy. Quite worthy as the main lead.

Kevin: You definitely have a good tone here; you have a very natural sounding teenage voice. I really like the low drawl in your voice because it gives me the sense that he's laidback and honest. However, I'm not sure if it fits the character at certain points. You sounded tired or bored throughout; adding some energy to your lines would benefit to give a little more variety to your performance.

Jessica: I wish she was my best friend... ;A; Really, I love how gentle and wise you made her sound, yet full of wit and playfulness woven into her low-key tone. You made her sound both mature and supportive, and your performance makes her one of my favorite characters in this radioplay! :3

Gray: Wooow, delivery was extremely natural. I love how casual and fun-loving you made him, with all the little quirks and acting full of life. You gave him tons of personality; if he was real I would wanna chill with him. XDD Unbelievably believable! 8D

Lydia: I expected Lydia to be rather peppy, but I'm glad you didn't turn her into a ditz! You made it so that she was just a really nice, smart girl, and you laid out her modest personality quite well. A bit monotone at some points, but I liked how you portrayed her shyness. Good job~

All the minor roles and extras were really well done and placed. This is a great slice-of-life story, with a well-written script brought to life with great actors. And of course, good morals are thrown in here. Tara's last line in part B kind of tugged at me, because it's something I had to consider before too, heh. So, for me it was easily to relate and connect.

Mixing was fantastic! The ambiance and sound effects blended together very well to create a believable setting; I could see this out of a movie hehe.

Overall, I enjoyed this muchly~. Good job everyone. <3 Looking forward to the last part!

[Tetsuya94]

I am extremely jealous of how natural Grey sounds, like, holy crap *_*

[TriPredRavage]

Oh Part B. I'm not even going to listen to it because I know it's awesome. How do I know it's awesome? Because it's the continuing saga in the genderbent life of me! Duh!

Okay, no, I listened to it and it was very good. Acting was consistant across the board and all should be proud. I was really glad to hear dragonknighttara take more of center stage in this part, same with Notebookface. I really thought they had stand out performances this part around.

I can't wait to hear the conclusion. I almost wanna speculate on what I think is going to happen in the end, but I kinda don't so I won't be wrong. o.O Really looking forward to it, Andie! Keep up the great work, and keep making the genderbent adaptation of my life interesting!! XD

[lightofhope18]

Lydia: I expected Lydia to be rather peppy, but I'm glad you didn't turn her into a ditz! You made it so that she was just a really nice, smart girl, and you laid out her modest personality quite well. A bit monotone at some points, but I liked how you portrayed her shyness. Good job~

I call that my Damaru voice.

I really enjoyed this part, the acting was great and very realistic. I am in love with the cast. The exchanges between Gray and Jessica was my favorite part. The scripting is clever and it flows really well. Thank you for for casting me as the slightly awkward non-drinker girl. My life role.

There was one character who had bad mic quality and that stood out among the other pretty good quality mics. It took me a while to realize that it was grass SFX when Chloe and Gray were walking because it sounded a bit too loud to be grass. Other than that, I thought this was really well done, Andie. I cannot wait for the next part<3

[Andieluca]

Haha. yay! Thank you everyone! ^^ Last part should be released...next Friday? Hopefully.[ I'm on a roll, cuz I'm on a roll? Lame. ] Anyways...yup! Thank you for all your kind comments! And I hope I won't disappoint y'all with the last part. ^^;

@lightofhope18: Mm...re-listening, that sfx is really loud. So sorry! haha, I'll be more careful next time!

[McTricky]

PARTAYYY UP IN DIS RADIOPLAAAYYYYY

Ahem. Notebookface was awesome in this, you sounded very natural in this. The writing and dialogue for this radioplay is really entertaining~

[Andieluca]

haha. Like a G6, yo! jkjk

Thank you McTricky!

[TheLifestreamNet]

That was awesome, i was kinda unsure how an audio only presentation would sound with no narration, but this was really engaging and painted a very vivid world. I can actually see the characters in my mind. The writing was great and Sera Phia's performance was top notch, she really conveys that girl next door character really well. I want to know someone like chloe lol.

Great mixing too

[Andieluca]

And this is the conclusion of Man Up!...on the first page, that is. XD

Finally, my first finished audio project. Thank you to such a wonderful and talented cast, I appreciate your patience with me, haha, and all the blunders I have made. Alright! And here's the end, I hope I don't disappoint. XD Thank you for all the support everyone!

Outtakes is out too...it's about...10 seconds after...XD

[TriPredRavage]

Way to throw an ending at us I wasn't expecting, Andie. I seriously was hoping that it would end with the less cliche ending of Chloe stepping aside for Lydia and Kevin...

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which, I mean, sorta happened, but not completely.

First off: "I'll Make a Man Out of You" Ringtone? WIN! (Did you make it the ringtone for the reason that I think you made it the ringtone? o.O)

Second: I really liked it. I thought it was just great all the way around. I liked how pivitol Gray and Jessica were in the ending. It felt really natural.

I only have two complaints:
1. JCTrance19's laugh creeped the hell out of me! (Sorry, dude. Laughing is hard, I know...)
2. I WISH Sera had sent you the video of that blooper session she had for you to put into the final product.