Please Teacher Clip "A New Teacher"

[earthtrap]

So I've been thinking about some anime I could fandub and decided I wanted to try dubbing some clips from Please Teacher. I hadn't seen any english fandubs of this anime on youtube so I decided, why not be the first one.



CAST:

Kei Kusanagi: earthtrap
Koishi Herikawa: Yuuaku Hikari
Matagu Shidou: UchihasBlade (YT)
Hyosuke Magumo: Tetsuya94
Kaede Misumi: hugcrazy101
Ichigo Morino: EruTheLoveAngel (YT)

Extras: RavenHunter101 (YT), xXNaichiXx (YT)

MIXING: earthtrap

[TsukinoKei]

Wow Earthtrap very nice clip you have here You really fit these type of characters only thing I suggest is to work on emotion a bit more like when he is getting choked actually put your arm around your neck and record that line lol. I really like the cast you chose for this you should make more.

[earthtrap]

Wow Earthtrap very nice clip you have here You really fit these type of characters only thing I suggest is to work on emotion a bit more like when he is getting choked actually put your arm around your neck and record that line lol. I really like the cast you chose for this you should make more.

Thanks Brandon. And ok. I'll work on that :]. And yeah. I plan on releasing more clips soon XD

[Ishtar]

Excellent job! I thought everyone sounded great, and I was really glad to see it wasn't the usual show too. I love Please Teacher, and it's been so long since anything has been done with it.

[earthtrap]

Excellent job! I thought everyone sounded great, and I was really glad to see it wasn't the usual show too. I love Please Teacher, and it's been so long since anything has been done with it.

Thank you. I hope you watch more that will be coming your way soon xD

[hyperknees91]

Not bad not bad earthtrap, definately getting better my friend ^^

I actually kinda forgot which character was which so I'll take my best guess.

Kei- Like I said you've improved lots, the energy level was good so he didn't come across as dull and your voice had nice projection even tho he is a softer character (also the voice is spot on for the character). I would say to take things to a further level now is to watch out for your lines not flowing well (though this only happened a few times mainly a few lines seemed a bit abruptly spoken). Grow a bit more comfortable with saying longer lines (the school year line towards the end seemed a bit rushed and you slurred school and year together so just spend a bit more time with the lines and I'm sure this can be avoided). Last thing I promise (God do I complain alot xD) on the line "yeah like something that will happen, nothing ever changes). The first part was fine, but I think you want to change your inflection slightly on the second part so that it carries more emotion, as it stands it sounds too similar to the first line and it doesn't flow well together. Though despite my complaints I thought you played the character well, he wasn't overplayed or underplayed it was just right in tone so just play around with your lines a bit more and I think you'll be fine.

Koishi- I think you were the black haired girl? Overall the tone and line delivery was good but I would project your voice slightly more outward because she does seem a bit dull otherwise (not too much of course), but still I thought your line emphasis was good and she wasn't static so it was a nice take, good job~

Matagu- Not many lines but they worked decently, second line seemed a bit underplayed and could've used a tad more energy or emphasis but the voice worked~

Hyosuke- Nicely done, really liked your voice and attitude for this character. When entering the classroom you really displayed the full energy of this character quite well and it set the pace for the rest of your lines. I will say that while your tone for the rest of your lines was good, it seemed like you both lost energy and got even a bit breathy/whispery while delivering them so they came off slightly rushed. Still overall I liked what you had to offer excellent job~

Kaede- Only one line but it was good, no complaints~

Ichigo- Also only a few lines but I couldn't find anything wrong with them, nice job~

[earthtrap]

Not bad not bad earthtrap, definately getting better my friend ^^

I actually kinda forgot which character was which so I'll take my best guess.

Kei- Like I said you've improved lots, the energy level was good so he didn't come across as dull and your voice had nice projection even tho he is a softer character (also the voice is spot on for the character). I would say to take things to a further level now is to watch out for your lines not flowing well (though this only happened a few times mainly a few lines seemed a bit abruptly spoken). Grow a bit more comfortable with saying longer lines (the school year line towards the end seemed a bit rushed and you slurred school and year together so just spend a bit more time with the lines and I'm sure this can be avoided). Last thing I promise (God do I complain alot xD) on the line "yeah like something that will happen, nothing ever changes). The first part was fine, but I think you want to change your inflection slightly on the second part so that it carries more emotion, as it stands it sounds too similar to the first line and it doesn't flow well together. Though despite my complaints I thought you played the character well, he wasn't overplayed or underplayed it was just right in tone so just play around with your lines a bit more and I think you'll be fine.

Koishi- I think you were the black haired girl? Overall the tone and line delivery was good but I would project your voice slightly more outward because she does seem a bit dull otherwise (not too much of course), but still I thought your line emphasis was good and she wasn't static so it was a nice take, good job~

Matagu- Not many lines but they worked decently, second line seemed a bit underplayed and could've used a tad more energy or emphasis but the voice worked~

Hyosuke- Nicely done, really liked your voice and attitude for this character. When entering the classroom you really displayed the full energy of this character quite well and it set the pace for the rest of your lines. I will say that while your tone for the rest of your lines was good, it seemed like you both lost energy and got even a bit breathy/whispery while delivering them so they came off slightly rushed. Still overall I liked what you had to offer excellent job~

Kaede- Only one line but it was good, no complaints~

Ichigo- Also only a few lines but I couldn't find anything wrong with them, nice job~

Thanks hyperknees.

Me: I do agree that I need to work on the longer lines since I slurred them. But most of the slurring was due to myself having a cut on my tongue and speaking with it is quite difficult. But I do thank u for the critique as I will promise to work on it with or without this cut on my tongue.

Koishi: I think Yuu did an awesome job. The reason for her sounding so quiet is because of her mic quality as she needs to get a new one XD.

Matagu: The 2nd line did seem underplayed but we can always fix that :]

Hyosuke: Tetsu did an awesome job as Hyosuke. I liked the energy he gave, although ur right that he lost his energy in some of his acting but this is due to the face his parents were home and that he had been doing a lot of lines that day in which case, his voice just wasn't there.

Kaede: Actually had 2 lines but still awesome job. XD

Ichigo: One line but the line fit perfectly.

Again. Thanks for the critique hyperknees. I'll be sure to tell everyone else.