[MCP] Clannad ~After Story~ Kyou Chapter - "It's all because I love you."

[Makopi]

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KwGJO3Kf_cU"]YouTube- [MCP] Clannad ~After Story~ Kyou Chapter - "It's all because I love you."[/ame]

Cast (in order of appearance):
Tomoya - Seymour
Kyou - Makopi
Ryou - lightofhope18
Mixing, scripting, casting - Makopi

Thank you to Seymour and LoH, who kindly took this up when I scouted both of them~ and they did so well, they're the reason I'm so proud of this clip, and I'd love to work with both of them again sometime.

I wanted to do this clip from the Kyou Chapter, partly because I noticed nobody's done a clip from this arc on here before. I'm personally more of a TomoyaxNagisa fan...but for some reason I just found this scene endearing.

I hope you enjoy watching it as much as I enjoyed mixing/voicing for it!

- Makopi

[Seymour]

Whoa, it's out!
This scene is always bit of a sappy one, a little too sappy, and kinda..expected from the twins, XD

Anyway, reviewing time!

Me as Tomoya- Ah, voicing a Blue-Haired, Typical Shoujo-Archetype Delinquint, who didnt see that coming...? I actually didnt hate how I did, but the line after Kyou kisses him couldve been so much better

Makopi as Kyou- Whoa, I really like your take on Kyou, it has that spunk to it, but also the emotional break in her for this scene, and you portayed it pretty well, you managed to keep the balance of crying and being able to speak clearly in balance, so well done

Lightofhope18 as Ryou- Very soft spoken, light, and pleasant to hear, nicely done, can't find anything to pick at.

Mixing, the footsteps were a bit odd towards the end, then again, I'm uber-picky about footsteps, XD, other than that, the mixing was pretty good

Thanks for letting partake in this, and keep up the good work~

[ichigoxcupcakes]

I wanted to do this clip from the Kyou Chapter, partly because I noticed nobody's done a clip from this arc on here before.

YAY~~~! <3
I will critique this

NOTE:
I actually did the entire ending of the Kyou Arc actually XD my account was suspended; so it's allll gone now.
;3;

[Makopi]

@Seymour: Thank you very much for the kind words~ and you were uh-mazing! I was really stoked to have you in the clip when I listened to your lines! XD

@ichigoxcupcakes: Yay, looking forward to your critique. 8D
AND, OH MY GOSH YOU DID THIS SCENE AND IT GOT TAKEN DOWN?! DDD: Sadness. I totally want to see your versionnnn.

[hyperknees91]

Hey nice clip makopi glad to see your still in the game (god I will send you that script soon I'm sorrrrry).

Seymour- For the most part you did very well as always. I think you captured his tone well and confidently. I would say that a few of your lines sounded a bit off such as "knock it off" which sounded a bit too aggressive and "yeah it is" which I think could have been softer and deeper. But overall you have an enjoyable take on the character so good job~

Makopi- Good stuff here the acting was all very natural and well executed~ I think you either were a bit too close to your mic or you needed to turn your lines down a bit because it seemed like your voice was a bit overpowering (though it wasn't that distracting). As for any criticism on your voice and acting if anything I think the line after her crying/sad tone ended she sounded a bit too "a matter of fact" or something and I don't think it fit in well with the scene. Though that's being nitpicky and really it didn't bother me that much and I thought your voice worked well for Kyou~

LightofHope18- Nice to hear ya again~ You didn't have many lines but they were all well delivered so nice job~

Mixing- Hmm it seems like all of seymours lines had noise in them so it would be very obvious when they ended as there would be an abrupt cut off. To counter this if you don't have good noise removal software would be to put some minor air conditioning ambience in the scene just so it kinda covers it up. And well other than turning your lines down just to match seymours there wasn't much else. I think you cut the song "ana" in such a way at the half way point a bit too abruptly, you might have wanted to just let it keep playing all the way through.

[lightofhope18]

I thought this clip turned out very good, despite the mic/noise removal issues. Makopi, honestly this is the first time I've ever heard you and I liked what I heard. You handled Kyou's teary parts very well and the transition between her depressed side and happy one was noticeable (which is good). However, your mic quality overpowered your performance and not in a good way. D:

Seymour, I was kinda surprise that you used a higher pitch for Tomoya because it always struck me that he would have a lower one (then again, I have never sat down and watched this show), so it took a bit to get used to. I thought you delivered your lines well for the most part, though there were a couple of parts that sounded too confident or awkward. It's a sappy emotional scene and in those kinds of scenes, men are not confident sounding, they are as sappy as the female. :D

The mixing was pretty good and hyperknees pretty much pointed out everything I noticed. Other than that, this was a job well done Makopi. I look forward to your future projects and I'd love to work with you again especially since you put up with my lazy persona so well~

[Makopi]

Bump for more feedback~? 8D