Zero No Tsukaima Fandub Clips [CANCELLED]

[earthtrap]

So yeah. Me and my new friend, Out Of The Infinity wanted to do a few ZnT clips so we decided to team up and do a few clips. Please enjoy and comments and critiques are welcome.

We will be posting more soon.

Clip 1
"Saito The Dog"



Clip 2
"Saito's Death"

CAST:

Saito Hiraga: earthtrap

Louise Vallière: Out Of The Infinity (ichigo_m in Clip 2)

Julio Chesaré: Lusion

Derflinger: Gonax

Mixing: earthtrap and Out Of The Infinity (Gonax For Clip 2 [SFX])

[DaelynD]

Yay Familiar of Zero! I love this anime XD

Critique Time!

EarthTrap:

I really like your take on Saito! What I really liked what the tone of voice you went with this character - you sounded natural with his voice - not forced or anything. Based off of other fandubs, Saito usually has a lower voice take on the character, but it's up to you if you want to go lower with the character in other clips. As for your emotion, it was spot - on. I really liked your reaction lines.

Out of the Infinity [Self-Critique]:

I love Louise so much - she's such a funny and cute character. I tried not to make her too high pitched so I hope the voice fits her. I think I should try to make her sound a little more natural in future clips - maybe watch annotation.

Mixing: Mixing is always difficult. I'm glad we got all the sound effects. Just watch some of the sound levels - Some tracks were a bit louder than others - so I would just watch to make sure everything is level. I would make the OST and sound effects slightly more quiet so they don't overpower the voices, but I know you were tired by the end of mixing so it's understandable. Great mixing ^^ I love mixing - so I hope I don't sound too picky -headdesk-


I look forward to dubbing more clips with you! Thank you so much for letting me be apart of this ^^ Keep up the great work :3

[earthtrap]

Yay Familiar of Zero! I love this anime XD

Critique Time!

EarthTrap:

I really like your take on Saito! What I really liked what the tone of voice you went with this character - you sounded natural with his voice - not forced or anything. Based off of other fandubs, Saito usually has a lower voice take on the character, but it's up to you if you want to go lower with the character in other clips. As for your emotion, it was spot - on. I really liked your reaction lines.

Out of the Infinity [Self-Critique]:

I love Louise so much - she's such a funny and cute character. I tried not to make her too high pitched so I hope the voice fits her. I think I should try to make her sound a little more natural in future clips - maybe watch annotation.

Mixing: Mixing is always difficult. I'm glad we got all the sound effects. Just watch some of the sound levels - Some tracks were a bit louder than others - so I would just watch to make sure everything is level. I would make the OST and sound effects slightly more quiet so they don't overpower the voices, but I know you were tired by the end of mixing so it's understandable. Great mixing ^^ I love mixing - so I hope I don't sound too picky -headdesk-


I look forward to dubbing more clips with you! Thank you so much for letting me be apart of this ^^ Keep up the great work :3

Really. Thank you. It's my first time voicing Saito so I wasn't to sure if I needed him to be lower or not. But I can try to be lower in the next clip :]

Your Louise was fantastic. Tone and emotion were spot on so don't even worry about that.

And yes, my mixing could use a little work. But you gotta remember, the way I mix is quite different then a lot of other people. I'll work on the sound levels next time, but yeah. I just gotta keep practicing. And it was thanks to you supplying the sfx that I completed this. And don't worry. I like honest critiques.

And you're very welcome. I hope to work with you soon too ^^

[earthtrap]

Clip 2 is up

[ichigo_m]

Oh ho ho critique time!! =D

Clip 1
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Saito::Earthtrap: Your voice is very suiting for the character. It sounded very natural. The line where Saito's face get's all "Cartoony" and does the >.< Thing sounded very underacted. You seemed to only be a little upset when he should be very Mad, it'd almost be better to overact here. The Line about being happy/upset was great though! Loved it!

Louise::Out Of The Infinity: Great job as always here. The "Washing" line sounded a bit awkward, but that's just me being very picky. It was really cute when you were drifting to sleep, the last few words were hard to understand, but that's understandable xD

Mixing:: Ther line volume was a bit odd. Louise's lines were very quite where as Saito's were too loud. xD The SFX were really nice though. The chains were great. The wind SFX at the end seemed out of place though...

Overall very nice clip~

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Clip 2
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Saito::Earthtrap: Wow the line about "I'm going to die" was really nice. It hit me hard. Good job. The emphasis on "YOU'RE right about that" was kinda odd though... Hmmm... Great screams!

Louise::Ichigo_m: Yay one liners~ =D

Julio::Rixxen: The Name of the flower sounded like gibberish, but it is a hard name to pronounce so I can understand that. xD The line sounded good, quiet but good. Probably just a mixing thing though.

Derflinger::Gonax: Right off the bat the first line seemed off. You put emphasis on really weird words. You said it "It's all for THE sake of the girl YOU LOVE." Sorta... When it should be more of a "It's all for the sake of the girl you LOVE". It's really hard to explain. It just sounded unnatural. Are you changing your voice here? Try it without changing and listen to how it sounds~ The next lines were spot on though, and alot easier to understand. (= Good job~

Mixing:: Wonderful mixing as always Gonax (=

Can't wait to see more of these~ (=

[earthtrap]

Clip 1: Thanks for the critique. For the cartoony line, well, it was a hard line to do so I just did what I could but I will work on it. As for the mixing. I'll try harder but audio levels always get me. XD

Clip 2: Thanks. I try and yeah. That one line did seem a little off. As for mixing. Gonax did do a pretty good job, but the footsteps were off in timing. Not sure if I mixed the voices and music in well so I'll let u decide XD

[Gonax]

Clip 1: Thanks for the critique. For the cartoony line, well, it was a hard line to do so I just did what I could but I will work on it. As for the mixing. I'll try harder but audio levels always get me. XD

Clip 2: Thanks. I try and yeah. That one line did seem a little off. As for mixing. Gonax did do a pretty good job, but the footsteps were off in timing. Not sure if I mixed the voices and music in well so I'll let u decide XD

you forgot really? lol

[earthtrap]

you forgot really? lol

What's that mean?

[Gonax]

Not sure if I mixed the voices and music in well so I'll let u decide XD

you did my man

and sfx was off due to...rendering? i guess

[earthtrap]

you did my man

and sfx was off due to...rendering? i guess

I meant if I mixed it in well xD and I see ok