Final Fantasy Tactics: War of the Lions - Ovelia's Kidnapping

[Heaven Incarnate]

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O V E L I A ' S
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"Why would Delita be serving Goltanna?"

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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VJSnLo4X198"]YouTube- [FANDUB] Final Fantasy Tactics: The War of the Lions - Ovelia's Kidnapping[/ame]

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C A S T

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Ramza Beoulve - McTricky
Delita Heiral - xSeo
Agrias Oaks - Subaru-camui
Princess Ovelia Atkascha - ElliotSkywalker

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Mixing - Heaven's Incarnate
SFX - VAA SFX Library, freesound.org

[ElliottSkywalker]

Wow! This came out really good. I've never seen this before so I didn't know what I was getting into, but this is really great. The SFX and everything really fit in with the mood. The voices were perfect and I am honored to be in this project with all these talented people!

[Daglot Alta]

That Was Great Their Was Nothing Wrong, I Have To Say, OMFG THAT WAS FUCKING EPIC....Ok Now That Im Out Of My Little Fangasm, That Was Really, Good, The Voice's Were Great, The Sound Effects Good, Every Thing Was Spot On, And I Have To Say, You Got To Do More, I Would Totally Watch It All

[Heaven Incarnate]

Haha, thanks, you two. I was really blown away by the cast myself while I was mixing. xD

I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;]

[Gonax]

*goes buys game*


nice dub dude

[Koichi_Saito]

Aiyah. I really loved this game, so forgive me if I sound very critical with my critique. I have to say, this dub was not bad, but there were some things that were lacking.

ElliotSkywalker as Ovelia: I honestly felt your performance was the best one out of the cast. I really liked the "I will not take orders from you!" line. Your deliveries were spot on and your voice was very appropriate for the character. Good job.

xSeo as Delita: Your voice wasn't bad, and I liked a few of your deliveries. However, I felt you could've sounded a bit more annoyed when Delita said "You've quite a mouth on you, Princess." since Delita was getting frustrated over the fact Ovelia wouldn't come quietly. I really liked your last line though, and you kept the smooth tone Delita has with his voice. Overall, you did a good job.

Subaru-camui as Agrias: I liked the voice you used with Agrias, but I felt as if a lot of your lines lacked emotion. One in particular was the "Hold there!" line. Agrias is a knight of a Holy order, so don't hold back or the line will sound dull. Also, the situation the characters were in was critical. After all, Agrias sworn her life to protect the princess, and there she gets kidnapped. You needed to sound more urgent in your lines. Other than that, you did a nice job. Just keep working at it.

McTricky as Ramza: Your voice choice seemed appropriate, but I could barely hear your lines. It was the softest out of everyone's, but that might be the mixer at work since all of the lines weren't balanced. And like I said to Subaru, your lines also lacked emotion. Ramza has seen his friend for the first time in years, and he believed Delita to be dead. Not only that, he just figured out that he's working for the enemy, so you could've sounded a bit more surprised with that first line, and self-questioning on the last. I've seen you do awesome work before McTricky, and every actor has a bad day sometimes. Just keep this in mind for next time.

Mixing: Overall, mixing was not that bad. You had the thunder, and you appropriately mixed the lines to fit the location. However, the big thing I was wondering through the whole thing was, "Where's the rain?!" I didn't hear any raindrops at all, despite the fact it was pouring rain! And as such, the footsteps outside the church was off since the grass is drenched in rain. Also, as I said above, each person's lines were off-balance in one way or another. Agria's lines sounded softer in the church than outside, while Delita's lines sounded a bit soft overall. But Delita's lines were even louder than Ramza's lines period. You just have to balance each person's lines equally so everything will blend together, and don't forget the rain! Though I still enjoyed the clip, the absence of the rain kept me from loving it. Overall, good work.

[ElliottSkywalker]

ElliotSkywalker as Ovelia: I honestly felt your performance was the best one out of the cast. I really liked the "I will not take orders from you!" line. Your deliveries were spot on and your voice was very appropriate for the character. Good job.

Aw, thanks so much for the kind critique. This clip was pretty fun to be part of, and I am honored I was able to perform my part right.

[Subaru-camui]

oh snap, i didnt see this was up 8D
thanks for the critique Koichi, I shall work harder ^w^
everyone did a great job 8D I had fun doing this ^^

[ElliottSkywalker]

Just a small BUMP! lol. Just helpin' out!

[Heaven Incarnate]

Thanks, Elliot. ;]

And thank you, everyone, for your input! It's really appreciated!

@ Koichi Saito: I do agree that, mixing-wise, I could have used more fitting footsteps. As for the rain, I did add it, but that could just be a problem with the audio balance, as you'd already stated. Thank you, I appreciate your constructive critique!