FMA: The Philosopher's stone [Part 2 & 3 UP]

[Subaru-camui]

So I made a trailer again but i hated the first one so I asked my sensei Hatty to help me fix it ^w^ I thank her for telling me why the first one was FAIL!!!! XD So here is the better version now up!!

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVKHPM2urwM"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVKHPM2urwM[/ame]

Cast: *In Trailer Only*

Hawkeye: Hatty
Winry: Hatty
Mustang: Spartan990
Edward: BloodRedOath
Havoc: BloodRedOath
Alphonse: Subaru-camui
Cook: Gonax1234
Girl Barry: Baugusbryson
Barry: LordoftheMorning

Music: Gackt-Sestugekka, Pandora hearts, Gackt-Mizerable

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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FRko8_vKkbg"]YouTube- The Philosophers stone part 1.mp4[/ame]
Cast:
Edward Elric: BloodRedOath
Alphonse Elric: Subaru-camui
Riza Hawkeye: Hatty
Roy Mustang: BladeBlur
Mae Hughs: Hyperknees
Havoc: BloodRedOath

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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ytkPFt6T7cY"]YouTube- Philosopher's stone part 2[/ame]
Cast:
Alphonse: Subaru-camui
Edward Elric: BloodRedOath
Roy Mustang: BladeBlur
Hawkeye: Hatty
Bradley: Sarifus
Winry: Hatty
Mae Hughs: Hyperknees
Soldier: Baugusbryson
Cook: Gonax
Girl Barry: Baugusbryson
Scar: Mugen26

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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfYnrVdB_9E"]YouTube- Philosopher's Stone part 3[/ame]
Cast:
Edward: BloodRedOath
Alphonse: Subaru-camui
Roy Mustang: BladeBlur
Barry The Chopper: LordoftheMorning
Winry: Hatty

Mixing: Gonax~ thank you ^^

[Jordan]

Well done, Grasshopper. Well done.

[Gonax]

BOO Gona only had one line!
lol great vid subaru

[Edit]
Nice TAILER btw

[AxerJ]

Nice mixing overall - though I'd adjust the levels in the beginning a bit, the voices were kind of jarring when they first came in. But once the music started everything got better, and seemed like it kept improving.

Voice-wise, standouts are definitely BloodRedOath and LordoftheMorning. You guys had great energy in all your lines and were fully convincing for the characters. That laugh at the end rocked, LotM! The other VAs were good, but their emotion fell flat at some points. All I can really suggest is to make sure you keep your character's motivations in mind at all times! The emotion usually takes care of itself if you do that.

But really, very nicely done overall! I've never seen FMA, but this interested me!

[Bree]

Psht. who ever that Ed is suckz. lol
<3

-Bree

[Subaru-camui]

XD thanks for the critiques everyone

[Pi_Face314]

This is super awesome! Kudos to LordoftheMorning, though. That laugh at the end made me jump out of my seat. Everyone else was really good, though. I can't wait to see the final thing!

[Subaru-camui]

K so Part 1 is finally up =3 special thanks to BladeBlur for filling in as Roy Mustang for me =3 I shall give a critique later

[hyperknees91]

Nice fandub, I enjoyed it. BRO you've got a nice voice for both havoc and ed, I think I preferred your havoc though.

Bladeblur I think your acting was fine for Roy, and the voice was the right age. Though I think it needed to be a bit lower in tone, as it seemed a bit light for him. Still you reflected his serious attitude well.

Hatty I didn't hear much from you but you've got a great voice for Riza (well doy)

Subaru I think your on the right track for Alphonse as well. But I would say if you can to pitch yourself slightly higher, and also you were a tad monotoned. I think you were trying to express his calm attitude a bit too much, if you can pull back on that aspect I think you'll be fine though~

Mixing was groovy though nice job~

[Subaru-camui]

=D thanks for the comment bro =3