[Poem] The Beast

[TESM]

Comments welcome! even if you tell me i suck!

a poem that's not necessarily me, but look at it and wonder, am i the same?


The Beast

I confess that though my life,
I always acted very strange,
Feeding off my personal strife,
And standard thought I’d derange.

I am the creator, I am the beast,
I go and starve,
I eat my feast,
I do my duty,
I slowly drain,
My body aches from constant pain.

My mind is where I am to drown,
Head in the stars,
Feet on the ground,
And as far as I travel,
And whatever the cost,
I will gain that true glory,
Or my soul will be lost.

[Cefaclor]

Woah. Talk about motivation...
Great poem there! Keep penning away!!!!..l like unless you dont want to and stuff. Which is cool too. But then if you want to.. you should go ahead. And if you want to but you're NOT quite sure..and then if you think youre sure but youre not quite sure how sure you are and then lets say youre kinda sure about being sure .... OK. Im going to stop now. period. No more words.

GREAT POEM (had to sneak that one in)

[TESM]

thanks a bunch... i go for some emotion and rythm.

scarily enough, i followed through that whole thing, maybe because i understand minimal programing (yikes!)

but appreciate it.

i keep penning away, for i am the beast, the lowly one.

[Tali]

Nice rhythem, nice motion, I love it.
What's TESM stand for?

[TESM]

thanks, appreciated.

and TESM is an acronym, and it's really dumb, made it in 5th grade and held onto it for... 6-7 years now

but it's dumb, it would make me lose my serious feel. i'm kinda embarassed.

[Tali]

Aw now I wanna know more than ever. Please!!!!