FMA Brotherhood - Ling vs Wrath

[Sarifus]

Here we go!
http://www.vimeo.com/9196622
http://www.4shared.com/file/21437512...th_fandub.html
http://rapidshare.com/files/34559128...ath_fandub.avi

Enjoy! Let me know if there's any problems with the link or anything.


Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood : Ling vs Wrath cast.

Gluttony: Gamebuddy
Ling: Gan Xingba
Lan Fan: Sapphire
Fuhrer King Bradley: Sarifus

Mixing by Sarifus.

Note; Unfortunately Gan was having a problem with his mic, so slight peaking on the shouting lines was unavoidable. Other than that, I'm very happy with this and massive thanks to the cast! I look forward to any opportunities to work with you all again. Oh also, due to the fact the Brotherhood ost2 has not yet been released, I've recreated all the music for this scene manually. I'll be uploading those tracks in the music forum soon.

Steven.

[Jordan]

Is there any way you can stream this? Because I'd rather not download it...

[Sarifus]

Is there any way you can stream this? Because I'd rather not download it...

I'm putting it on 4shared atm. =) Should be done in a few minutes.

[Jordan]

I'm putting it on 4shared atm. =) Should be done in a few minutes.

Great, looking forward to it.

[Sarifus]

Done. It looks like 4shared has stretched the aspect ratio slightly, but never mind.

[Jordan]

I thought that was quite good! The cast all had fitting voices, the mixing was great. Sure there was some mic peaking here and there, but it didn't take away from the overall performance. I've got no complaints, so good job.

[~*Melancholy-Of-Scheris*~]

..I loved it! Great work everyone!!
Now for the critique

Gluttony: Gamebuddy
Maybe I'm a weirdo, but I thought that was really cute X''DIt wasperfect for gluttony~ And at a professional standard too! Hey, this may be a offtopic forward slash strange question, but you wouldn't happen to have been a member of the former 'SonicAnime.net' forums would you? I happen to recognize your username ~ Everything was spot on! Ahk, How I hate nitpicking. Uhmm...I don't know what to suggest you work on....
Ling: Gan Xingba
Can I take you home? Can I CAN I CAN I? I can't even describe how perfect that was for Ling, I really can't. So charming *_* ~ Amazing job!Its exactly how I imagined ling to sound!! Allthough towards the end your emotion went a little off, *Stares at your fail mic with sadness* but I understand the problems of working with a fail mic as I have one myself. To criticize, I'd say work on your emotion a tad bit more, There's always room for improvement right? I'll look forward to hearing more from you in the future~

Lan Fan: Sapphire
Your energy was great! I especially loved your scream, it was really professional and sounded really good~ Your emotion was good too, and so was the quality of your voice. I'll nitpick now, Try to sound a little tincy bit more determined..just a tiny tiny bit more!!

Fuhrer King Bradley: Sarifus
I'm sowwy QWWQ I didn't like your Bradley voice. I guess I'm just used to hearing him the way he is in the official dub, but to me, The way that he spoke with a 'softer' voice in the Official dub made me cringe, knowing how evil he truly is. Your emotion needed work too, but if you keep working you'll improve greatly!!
The last line "You didn't think I was blind in my left eye...Did you?", OH MY GOD, I just got a chill down my spine! That was spot on!! See you ARE capable of acting well, Your a good actor! , just not for this role :/ But keep trying!! This is going to sound really..strange, But I think the voice you used there would be really good in a watership down fandub ^^ It sounded just like the 'evil' rabbit, I think he was called the general. Man I love that film (and book). Yeah, you'd be so awesome as him~

Overall everyone did a good job and I really enjoyed watching this!!
I hope to see more from you all in the future

[Sarifus]

..I loved it! Great work everyone!!
Now for the critique

Gluttony: Gamebuddy
Maybe I'm a weirdo, but I thought that was really cute X''DIt wasperfect for gluttony~ And at a professional standard too! Hey, this may be a offtopic forward slash strange question, but you wouldn't happen to have been a member of the former 'SonicAnime.net' forums would you? I happen to recognize your username ~ Everything was spot on! Ahk, How I hate nitpicking. Uhmm...I don't know what to suggest you work on....
Ling: Gan Xingba
Can I take you home? Can I CAN I CAN I? I can't even describe how perfect that was for Ling, I really can't. So charming *_* ~ Amazing job!Its exactly how I imagined ling to sound!! Allthough towards the end your emotion went a little off, *Stares at your fail mic with sadness* but I understand the problems of working with a fail mic as I have one myself. To criticize, I'd say work on your emotion a tad bit more, There's always room for improvement right? I'll look forward to hearing more from you in the future~

Lan Fan: Sapphire
Your energy was great! I especially loved your scream, it was really professional and sounded really good~ Your emotion was good too, and so was the quality of your voice. I'll nitpick now, Try to sound a little tincy bit more determined..just a tiny tiny bit more!!

Fuhrer King Bradley: Sarifus
I'm sowwy QWWQ I didn't like your Bradley voice. I guess I'm just used to hearing him the way he is in the official dub, but to me, The way that he spoke with a 'softer' voice in the Official dub made me cringe, knowing how evil he truly is. Your emotion needed work too, but if you keep working you'll improve greatly!!
The last line "You didn't think I was blind in my left eye...Did you?", OH MY GOD, I just got a chill down my spine! That was spot on!! See you ARE capable of acting well, Your a good actor! , just not for this role :/ But keep trying!! This is going to sound really..strange, But I think the voice you used there would be really good in a watership down fandub ^^ It sounded just like the 'evil' rabbit, I think he was called the general. Man I love that film (and book). Yeah, you'd be so awesome as him~

Overall everyone did a good job and I really enjoyed watching this!!
I hope to see more from you all in the future

Thanks for the critique!
Hmm. Bradley does a fair bit of shouting/projecting in this scene, so I couldn't really sound quite the way he does in the first anime. But this is the first time I've dubbed him so far, so I imagine I'll improve in time.

Steven.

[hyperknees91]

Pretty good dub! The voices weren't what I expected but they were all farily well played.

Sarifus I think your still easing into bradley as I can tell his rough/old voice is still a bit uncomfortable for you. Your deliveries were still natural and all but I believe you need to be a bit smoother and a little more intimidating (though I agree the final line was superb). Still I compliment you for pulling him off this well because he's a tricky character so good job ^^


Fantastic job mixing and crazy good music composing skills for remaking the track for this scene!

[Gan Xingba]

Awesome! Glad to see the finished product. It came together really nicely. And holy crap, did you seriously reconstruct that entire track, Sarifus? Holy shit. Amazing job on that, man.

I thought you, Saphire and Gamebuddy did a damn fine job on the clip acting wise. Gamebuddy's take on Gluttony was hilarious, really childlike but kind of creepy at the same time. I liked it a lot. Saphire, you didn't have a ton to work with here, but I dug what I was hearing. The scream was really good, and I know those kinds of screams can be really awkward to try and get right. As for you, Sarifus, I thought the struggles you had with maintaining the voice really only came through when you raised your voice. The spoken lines, such as the ones when Bradley first appeared, sounded great in my opinion. It certainly helped that you had really good delivery. The way you spoke sounded very patient and measured, perfectly in character for Bradley.

And thanks for the critique, Katy. Glad you liked the overall take I had on the character. I'm by no means an acting veteran, so I'll definitely try to keep improving. But yeah, I need to figure out a way to adjust the gain on my Snowball to prevent peaking for those super loud lines. Either that or bite the bullet and get a new mic...