Clannad - The World Has Ended

[Rific]

Me and a friend whipped up this little fandub one night. One of the funnier scenes, thought it would be fun to do. It's short and sweet, anyway enjoy!

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Cast

Tomoya Okazaki- Rific

Youhei Sunohara- Greg0050

Music
Clannad OST- Spring Wind


Thanks for watching!

[Gonax]

Okay here I go


I never seen this anime so I can't really judge the voices
but the acting on this video could use more practice

also I think the mic was too loud but that can be my fault since i'm wearin headphone lol idk


but overall the acting could use some work but with great effort I can see you makin better fadub in the future

[AmyAnn]

Ah, one of my all time fave Sunohara moments.

Tomoya Okazaki - Rific
The tone was too low and gruff for Tomoya. Your sarcasm just wasn't there and you sounded as though you wanted to laugh at some lines. You just sounded like you were reading from the script and not actually thinking on how they should be said.

Pointers
- Work on getting into the character. Read a line over a few times and try to get into the way that the character would say it so as to show the right emotion.
- Work on tone. Change it to fit a character and help vary your range.

Youhei Sunohara - Greg0050
Sounded a bit too forced-nasally and peaked a few times. The emotion seemed odd and fake at most points but you seemed to have the goofy personality on some lines. Don't force your voice as it sounded quite fake and sore, especially when you tried to raise your voice.

Pointers
- Don't force your tone. If it hurts, don't do it. Work around it so that it still fits with the clip.
- Work on emotion. Same as for Rific, work on getting into the character by reading the line over a few times and getting into the character.

Mixing
In the original version, there was no BGM as far as I can remember. The music was a bit too light and happy for this scene and it really took away from the main point of this scene. The music shouldn't have been there. The voices sounded very loud compared to the music and peaked a tiny bit.