Woo that was a fun clip, can't wait to see the next one.
Mars - Appropriately voiced and had the power to go along with it. I love the menacing tone throughout all his lines, his laughs were great and his power he was able to stress on his voice was also great. The only thing is that at times while delivering some of his louder lines, he did seem very strained with his voice. Though overall an excellent job!
Chester- A good voice for chester, has that kind and friendly nature to it that makes it easily likable. Chesters emotions were for the most part pretty strong here, he was quite believable in his line delivery and fit the character well. However his ennunciation seemed to falter a bit on the louder lines towards Mars and it took some of the power out of the performance. Also the quieter lines towards Cless while they had good emotion, felt a little awkwardly delivered. "You heard the man cless, I can buy a little time, don't take too long ok" for example every line was paced in such a way that it didn't flow well together so he seemed a tad unbelievable at points. It probably would've been better to switch the pitch at the start of "I can buy a little time" so it wouldn't come out so flat. It's a good take of the character nonetheless.
It's late but I must critique!
takahata101 // Mars -- You were absolutely brilliant! The voice was perfectly evil and when you first laughed my eyes widened. Definite official dub material!
xSeo // Cress -- You have played Cress before right? If you have you've really improved. You did an amazing job and contrary to what you said before, I thought both times you yelled "Chester!" were very believable.
ichigoxcupcakes // Mint -- I want to hear more from you as Mint! You did perfectly, but I need more!
Me >.> // Chester -- Thank you all for the kind comments! It really brightens up my day (even though it's night). I agree some lines were more stoic-y than they than should have been, but thank you Sera for having me redo the "keep her safe" line! Phew... Don't really understand the ennunciation problem though. Maybe you could be a bit more specific, I'd love to see if I could fix anything for the future.
ConVito // Morison -- Fantastic! I've always liked your work ConVito and you were a really convicing Morison. The going back in time explanation felt a little bit forced to me. I think if you would have made him sound a bit more tired or softer it would have fit better. Two thumbs up nonetheless.
Actorman // Dhaos -- I've always hated doing one-liners. They're the most stressful thing. One chance to make and impression and one-million different ways to deliever it. You hit the nail on the head with this. Not overly godly or evil, but it had an "I'm above you, lolz" tone. Nice.
SeraPhia // Mixing -- The sound effects were all great, but they should have been much much louder (because I suppose you ripped them?). Hunt down those SFX Sera!! Anyways thanks for including me in this. The thing as a whole was very impressive and I can't wait for more.
Watched it this morning. Very fun clip. I enjoyed the OVA despite it being a tad abridged. Can't really say what hasn't been said though. That's what I get for being late. XD Good job, guys. =)
This turned out pretty nicely. I'm slightly frustrated with the fact that I didn't really match flaps as well as I thought I did, but the clip was entertaining enough to help me look past that.
Unfortunately, I don't really have much to say on this clip... I suppose I'll watch it some more so I can find some spots to critique on. Good clip.
Cute clip - I really liked the feel of this one a lot. Some great atmosphere building here :3
Arche - Sera Phia - I really liked you in this. Very cute and light and you had good energy. Nothing really stuck out to me as worth critiquing beyond simply enjoying your performance, so great work with this character!
Claus - Para_Bolic - For the most part the acting was really there for this character overall, but I think it lacked a bit of voice commitment. It sounded fairly good as a performance, but I wasn't exactly sure how to pinpoint what he exactly sounded like by the end of the clip. A few lines here and there were a bit flat too, but nothing really bad. This is really nitpicking. Ennunciation was awesome though, thank you ^^ (personal pet peeve)
Mixing, as to be expected, was lovely, despite the occasional lip flap issue. But overall this reallywas just fun to watch! Aside from some nitpicks, great clip both of you!
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