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  1. #1 Heaven wouldn't be heaven (Without you) 
    Honestly trying this time/8 yrs, under 1000 posts! Stray's Avatar
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    Just a Strayer original, soon to be made into a song

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    Driving on a rainy night
    Looking for some kind of light
    In the darkness

    That's when I lose control of the car
    And/But I tell myself it won't be far
    To safety

    I pray that this is not the end
    Fate conspires and I contend,
    I contend

    'Cause heaven's not a place I'd like to be
    If you were not next to me
    Flashback. my life, you're all I see
    Never forget me

    Suddenly I feel very COLD
    Light shines all around me
    Could this be that Holy place?
    I hear heavenly sounds
    Then I remember what I'd leave behind
    My life, my friends, something I'll never again find:
    YOU

    'Cause heaven's not a place I'd like to be
    If you weren't here with me
    And I'd give up having everything
    Just so I could hold you again

    I wake up in a hospital room
    Doctor's come and nurses loom
    They all ask me if I can speak
    Outstretch my arm, Its you I seek

    All I feel is your gentle touch on my hand
    Makes me remember how we used to walk HAND in hand
    I've realized that I was in heaven before
    But, if I'm not with you,
    I don't wanna be there anymore

    Heaven's not a place I'd like to be
    If you weren't here with me
    I'll tell you I love you whenever I can
    And I promise to never leave you again.
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    니키 - Everybody come and play. Nikki Wright's Avatar
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    Beautiful ;-;

    I'm gonna rock your body 'til Canada Day.
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    Very good!
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    Ooh very nice stuff and quite unusual imagery ^^
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    Oh this is really nice and a good idea. I can't wait to hear the song !
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    Talk about characters out of a comic book. pyromaster's Avatar
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    hmm.. is this poem dedicated to anyone Stray? it's really lovely, and very emotional. I can tell you really put thought into that one. Very well done
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