Out of the Infinity's First Demo Reel!

[DaelynD]

Hey everyone ^^

I decided to post my first demo reel! I hope you all enjoy it! I...um...hope that everyone likes it ^^ Just like everyone here, I love voice acting, and I hope to become good at it someday XD

Critiques are nice :3 Though I'll say this isn't my best voice acting, but it is my voice acting!

Ya XD

http://www.box.net/shared/ja33rm9xfy

[DaelynD]

Bumping :33

[hyperknees91]

Hey I thought this was a decent demo reel, had some nice goofy voices along with some stern voices so you showed a good variety of characters.

I did think your best lines were you playing the girl from Air and the "Keep your opinions to yourself" as they both felt pretty natural and decently acted out.

However with your other lines I felt your pacing on your dialog and characterization was a bit off. I think you tried to focus a little too much on the characters antics and it made the dialog come across as rather read and although you seemed to have the voices down, it was hard to get much character out of these lines.

So I think practicing on playing with your lines a little more will do you alot of good, If you can put more energy and get a better feel for your characters I think your voice could really shine!

Minor tip~ maybe add some bgm to your next demo reel to help it flow better.

[DaelynD]

Hey I thought this was a decent demo reel, had some nice goofy voices along with some stern voices so you showed a good variety of characters.

I did think your best lines were you playing the girl from Air and the "Keep your opinions to yourself" as they both felt pretty natural and decently acted out.

However with your other lines I felt your pacing on your dialog and characterization was a bit off. I think you tried to focus a little too much on the characters antics and it made the dialog come across as rather read and although you seemed to have the voices down, it was hard to get much character out of these lines.

So I think practicing on playing with your lines a little more will do you alot of good, If you can put more energy and get a better feel for your characters I think your voice could really shine!

Minor tip~ maybe add some bgm to your next demo reel to help it flow better.

Thank you for the critique ^^ I really appreciate it and I'll take your advice and use it as best as I can :3