RnBP- CLANNAD Ep 4 - Clip FanDub

[Akairo]

RednBlue Productions
Presents

CLANNAD
Episode 4 Clip FanDub

This was originally posted under another name so I understand if there is any confusion.
Thank you all so much for being patient with me!
It's finally finished!



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Cast
Nagisa - SweetSourSauce
Tomoya - Ramune
Sunohara - Eh-jhey
Kyou - LittleStar
Ryou - Estellise
Button - FadedPhantom

Mixing, SFX, Etc
SpiralJustice


Mmmm... I know it's not the best mixing ever, but I tried to focus on how real I could make it sound (...real sounding anime?) Considering distance from the characters, location, etc... So that's why some sound quieter then others...

I'd like to thank everyone who was in this project, especially the fill-ins for the original cast, you saved this thing from going down the toilet!

Hope you all enjoy! Please feel free to critique the AVAs as well as my mixing if you're up to it!

[hyperknees91]

Hmm first off the main problem is the music is rather loud compared to the voice acting so it's hard to hear what they are saying.

Tomoya- Pretty high pitched for Tomoya. Also he needs more enthusiasm overall as his lines are read pretty monotoned. Try to put more emphasis on certain certain words if you can as it makes your character seem more lively.

Sunohara- Pretty good energy from this guy, though make sure you ennunciate everything as I couldn't always make out what you were saying. Though the sound effect you used was really cool.

Ryou- Appropriatly voiced and captured the character quite well. Some lines you were forced to read rather fast so they weren't always expressed the best, but overall I thought your performance was fine.

Kyou- A bit high pitched and cutsey sounding for Kyou. She is slightly tomboyish so try not to stray too far from that. Though the energy was pretty good, so good job on that.

Nagisa- Also read her lines really fast and seemed like a rather energetic Nagisa, rather than a nervous Nagisa. Still she did well once it got to the "hot scene" part.

[Sh3rl0ck]

Wow, this turned out amazing! 8D
I'm rather bad at critiquing, so, forgive me guys!

Ramune: Great job on Tomoya! I loved how you portrayed him, the voice fits perfectly with his character and the scene.

Eh-Jhey: Excellent work on Sunohara! I absolutely loved it, the voice and emotion was portrayed flawlessly. Keep up the good work!

LittleStar: I was expecting a much lower interpretation for Kyou, but I loved the voice you chose! Amazing emotion *envys*! Even though you were in the scene very shortly, you did an amazing job!

Estellise: Oh wow, so cute sounding! x3 The voice matched Ryou perfectly, no complaints!

FadedPhantom: You're an adorable Button! *puhee*

SweetSourSauce(Myself): I think I could have possibly gone a tad bit higher with my voice, and could have maybe shown a little bit more emotion for here and there, but overall I'm satisfied with what I was able to produce...

I had so much fun working with all of you; hope to maybe get another chance someday!~ <3

Nagisa- Also read her lines really fast and seemed like a rather energetic Nagisa, rather than a nervous Nagisa. Still she did well once it got to the "hot scene" part.

I was syncing the mouth flaps, as I believe Estellise was doing as well. Thats most likely the reason why they came off as fast.

[Estellise]

I loved how this came out! <3 It was really good!

Nagisa/SweetSourSauce - I really loved your Nagisa! <3 The only thing I can think of critiquing is a little higher pitch maybe, but I really loved it! It was very cute <3 Great job!

Tomoya/Ramune - I loved your tone for Tomoya I had no complaints about that! But I do think you could have protrayed a little more emotion on a couple lines. But you did a really great job overall! <3

Sunohara/Eh-jhey - Oh my gosh your voice seriously matched him! <3 I really loved the way you performed this! Such a perv haha! <3 this was excellent!

Kyou/LittleStar - This may have been only one line, but I loved your voice and performance for Kyou! <3 Great job!

Ryou/Estellise - LAWL. WHUT? I'd rather not self-critique xD I'll leave that to others.

Button/FadedPhantom - CUTE!!! <3 Not much else to say xD It was very cute! <3

Mixing - Nothing wrong with mixing if you ask me, it was perfect! <3 Great job!

Everyone did so good! I was glad working with all of you guys! <3 I really loved this!