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  1. #1 ...Be My Valentine 
    …Be My Valentine

    Ryan (Matt Alan) and Sarah (Shannon Hilchie) were the perfect couple, head over heels in love, engaged to be married…until one year ago on February 14th, Sarah cheated on Ryan with his best friend, Sam’s (Miki) cousin, Zack. (Tamtu Bui) One year later, Ryan is “enjoying” a nice sleep when Sam starts knocking on his door…


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    Original Story By: Matt Alan
    Edited By: Tamtu Bui
    Special Thanks to: Nikki Wright, Tamtu Bui, Manami, Masahiko, and Watercolor/Ren.
    Dedicated to: Anyone who’s ever been alone on Valentine’s Day
    Length: 9:00
    Hosted By: Nikki Wright (LOOOOVE YOU SIS! >D!)
    Link: http://www.mattalan.net/bmv/BeMyValentine.zip

    ~*~CASTLIST~*~

    Ryan – Matt Alan
    Samantha – Miki-chan
    Fake French Man in Movie – Matt Alan
    Fake French Woman in Movie – Shannon Hilchie
    Zack – Tamtu Bui
    Sarah – Shannon Hilchie

    ~*~MUSIC~*~

    Dinner with Amelia (The Terminal)
    Looking for Work (The Terminal)
    Gerudo Valley (Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Hyrule Symphony}
    Destiny...Canneloni...& The Tale Of Viktor Navorski Reprise (The Terminal)
    A Happy Navorski Ending (The Terminal)

    ~*~

    *coughs* There are a few technical difficulties with the volume of Ryan and Sam's lines in a few places, and one of the French Woman's lines was unbearingly loud, and I couldn't get it right (I promise. o_o; the thing would not volume reduce at ALL.) All these problems lay on me and my indept mixing skills. I had a wonderful cast who got their lines to me in a very short amount of time, and I look forward to working with them again in the future, if they're willing to work with me that is. >D
    Last edited by Matt Alan; 03-26-2006 at 07:50 AM.
     

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    Matt, this was incredibly sweet. I'm not quite sure what was hindering fixing the volumes, but other than that it really was nice! ^-^
     

  3. #3 Nice Job!!! 
    Completly AWESOME!
    Matt that was the best work i've seen from you...wait that was the only work i've seen from you other than a couple of dubs :-p but none the less i'm sure that was one of your best pieces, now a little review:

    Ryan/Matt - Awesome, your acting was almost exactly SPOT on although only a few places sounded a bit weird but i was paying alot of attention lol, but very very nice job man!

    Samantha/Miki - Very nice job your acting was really good aswell i had no trouble except sometimes when it was quite in your lines i could hear a metalic sound but very nice work aswell!

    Frenchy/Matt - HAHA what can i say? Ummm...nice job i s'pose lol although he sounded menacing and crazy but it was very funny.

    Frenchy Girl/Shannon - Hehe also hilarious very nice job but once again she sounded crazy aswell but it was funny as hell.

    Zack/Tamtu - Nice job man! No problems with your lines at all...*try's to think of a way to help* nope i got nothing nice job!

    Sarah/Shannon - Nice job, i had no problems with you at all...you didn't have loads of lines but the ones you did were spot on.
     

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    great bg music.. anbd good fXx....

    the volume got kinda messy. and the laughter from both sides was forced in a LOT of places.. which make it AKWARD. >_>;; did i mention the voume got wacky?! the pause after 5:20 was a bit odd too.

    well anywhoo the scripting was awesome & acting wise... it was great. no real complaints.

    good cheesy v-day short thing
    ~~~!!! >3< *sigh* >3< !!!~~~


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    mushy! cute story!
    ^_^
     

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    Thanks for the comments, everyone!

    ...oh, is it my turn now?

    Mixing
    Well, I agree with the fact that the volumes are all different, first of all, but that's okay for me. It didn't shy away from the feeling of the whole thing. (The one line that got me off track were the kissing lines) Mixing was good, in my opinion, though...some of the SFX were odd to me, but I think it's because of the different recording levels of them or something. ^^ ...by the way...is that a bird in the background? I would suggest getting multiple bird noises so it doesn't sound as repetitive.

    Ryan/French Man ~ Matt
    I love your accent. XD You know I was gonna hear it. *biiiiig grin* You were very nice in this, and very believable. The echo effect on your lines before the truck incident threw me off a little (You sounded more like you were in a tunnel than far away). All in all, you had good tone and lovely acting. ...and...hooray for French men? XD

    Sam ~ Miki
    Not bad, but could use a little work. I need to get a little better with laughter, though...(Thanks, Anii). That's all I'll say about myself. >D;;

    Zack ~ TamTu
    *ROFL* That was hilarious. Terrific performance, as usual. You reminded me of the laughing guy in Mary Poppins, though. "I love youuu, wheee!" XDD

    Sarah/French Woman ~ Shannon
    You have a lovely voice. The only complaint is the volume in some of your lines, but I won't pin that on you. ^.~ Very cute, very funny...I liked it.


    Once again, I thought this was a beautiful RP, and it was fun to be in. Nice work, Matt. &lt;3 There better be a sequel. ^.~

    EDIT: Or a prequel. =D
     

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    Time for me to add my two cents!

    I really liked this. I wish I knew why that damn line was so loud, because I think it was the lowest I record and I worried that it was too low. *laughs*

    Everyone was so good, especailly you, Miki. Your emotion was SO natural, it was fabulous.

    Total A+ for everyone. Except volume. Volume is not invited to the next party.
     

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    That was a really cute radioplay you guys. It was very original and this really made my day. Thank you guys for giving us singles some hope.

    Ryan/Matt - I bow to your acting skills. You did really well!

    Samantha/Miki - Man, I was impressed with you as well. Your emotions were right on the mark along with Ryan's.

    French Man/Matt - I couldn't help but crack a smile when I heard this guy.

    French Woman/Shannon - Same as the french man.

    Zack/Tamtu - Dude...I couldn't stop laughing at the voice you did. You sounded crazy...and that's NOT a bad thing, it's a good thing.

    Sarah/Shannon - Very good, awesome job.

    mixing/Matt - Awesomeness, if there were any minor errors, I must've missed them because I didn't hear any problems with it.
     

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    Little bitty *bump*. ^^
     

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    xD This was great!! Sooo cute and sweet!! Everyone did an amazing job! The only complaint i have is in some of the lines, Sam's lines sounded kinda muffled? Also one or two Sarah's lines were quiet then sudden REALLY loud xD. But everyone was brilliant! This is probably one of the best RP's heard in a while xD Great job, Matt Alan, Miki-chan, TamTu, Shannon and everyone else who were involved with this!
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