TriPredRavage 2009 Demo

[TriPredRavage]

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Well, it's finally time. I got a lot of assistance from ~xXLittlexGurlXx~ with this. She gave me a lot of creative input and even mixed the music into the background of the clips (with two exceptions; one was mixed by McTricky). I couldn't have done it without her.

Any Advice or Critique you guys are willing to give is much appreciated! And give it to me straight; I can take it! Thanks in advance.

[hyperknees91]

Fun fun, I really enjoyed this demo reel. Seems like you got a lot of energy and enthusiasm.

Your best voice is obviously your first voice and those more energetic ones. Your calm and low ones are ok but they feel like your less comfortable with them. Try to add more gruff I guess while keeping the same enthusiasm for your medium ones (not the energy just the enthusiasm).

The goofy voices were also pretty cool so good job there.

Your last two voices are probably where you need a bit of work. The sad one needs to sound sadder or more anxious. And the angry one could stand to sound a little angrier.

Still it was definately a fun demo reel and I enjoyed it. Good job!

[~xXLittlexGurlXx~]

Yay its finally out~!

I'm gonna give you a little critique hehe =]

I REALLY love your medium/medium-high voices, I think that you should work on your little boy voices. You have the same problem I do =[, somtimes you sound more on the squeeky version of a little kid which can sometimes make it sound anoying (this is me >.<), what helps is to add a lighter airy tone to your voice.

Overall you did an awesome job on this~!
it was a real honor to help you with this ^^~!

[TriPredRavage]

Thank you for the critiques! I will definitely keep those things in mind in the future!

[McTricky]

Uwaa...! Finally a demo reel from TPR! I'll give my thoughts on it soon, just gotta dash off to college and hand in this assignment D;

EDIT: Eh...finished the assignment already, and I got some time til 4pm so....

"Big words from you Amalia. Let's go!" = Epic~

I've heard any of your other voices other than your lines for Emerson, and now I'm even more impressed!! You have a great range, and I thought your high-voice were pretty cool. The first one, not so much, but other others great. You sounded like Hanataro from Bleach in one of them ^^ Your comical voices caught me off guard, and ended up laughing ^^ I think there was a part where a word was mispronounced. "There's a strong energy resonance eminating from the source of ???? light." That "????" sound like either: the/that/thou. But other than that great demo, you have promising talent ^^

[TriPredRavage]

Thanks for the critique, McTricky! I'm going to have to check out Bleach in hopes of hearing the character that you are talking about, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll keep what you said in mind. Thanks a lot, bud!

[Sera Phia]

I was totally looking forward to this D< Why didn't you tell me!? XD

Big words from you... Yesss. Yes!! All I have to say about it, but it's definitely one of your strongest voices. Your voice is well suited for the main male protagonist. Great way to start off the demo reel. The mixing was a bit more epic compared to the other clips, though, making it stick out a bit too painfully.

Something is happening... This is a great display of your range, since many guys don't go up that high. Very cute, too. After giving it a few listens, it sounds a little forced, but I think that it is a good testament to your higher range.

There is a strong energy... A pretty surprising jump from the high voice. It sounds a little forced, but a deeper, gruff voice is more useful than a lot of guys think. The mixing in the background there is great.

It is my job to assure... I gave this one a quite a few listens, and it took a while for me to fully decipher what you said. I love the pitch and voice you used, but it was difficult to figure out what you were saying.

I think we should get along... Another great one! Your medium-high range is really great. No complaints.

You are our prey... This one sounded a little similar to the "it is my job" one, mostly because of the whispery feel you gave it, and also the fact that you slurred your words a little. I didn't understand the emotion you gave to this one - I'd expect a line like that to be a bit more commanding/threatening.

It's survival of the... I really liked this one XD The energy was great, and you executed the wacky voice very well.

Shoot! I can't believe... I liked this one, too! Unlike your other lower one, the lower, gruff voice sounded a more natural. No complaints, again!

Whoa! That's like... I lol'd. Excellent job here - the voice fit the stereotypical character well, and you executed the line awesome-ly. 8D

I landed right... Another cute one |D. What I like about this demo reel so far is that the higher voices each have a different feel to it. However, it was a short and soft line, so it could be easily overlooked.

If you wanna grow... This line flowed very well from the previous line, so kudos to the mixing! I've no complaints on this one - it's another one of those hero or hero's friend voices, and you do those so well.

I don't know what... Now this one sounded similar to the "I think we should get along" voice. On the other hand, the emotion was done well.

Hey, you! Great medium-gruff voice. I mostly hear lower voices as gruff, so it's nice to hear some of that here. Other than hero types, this demo reel also shows that you can do those easily-angered characters, too. Only nitpick with this one is that it ended the demo reel oddly - when I first listened to it, I thought: "Huh? It's over?" Other than that. good job.

Overall, you have an impressive range of voices. You focused a lot on higher voices, which is great considering that most guys focus on lower ranges, but you might want to watch out if they sound too similar. The mixing was great - my only nitpicks is that the first line was louder and, like I said, stood out a bit too much and the ending was sudden. What I'd suggest is to add a some more emotional range to it.

Again, this is a great demo reel!! It'd definitely earn you some roles. 8D

[TriPredRavage]

Oh, wow, Sera! I wasn't expecting such an in depth critique! lol

Thanks so much, Sera Phia! I will absolutely keep those things in mind in the future! I'm glad you liked it so much! I owe a lot of credit to ~xXLittlexGurlXx~.

[Damaru]

Very good, I love it! X3 You have great range and emotion!!

[TriPredRavage]

Thanks, Damaru!