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09-17-2009, 05:31 AM
This was so engaging to listen to! I'd heard a lot of good things about this radioplay and I can't say I was disappointed. majia's chilly voice sounds great as the GAME voice, and Hato's freaked screaming in the beginning set everything off right. After listening I had to read the rest of the story...I'm very excited to hear more from LittleStar and mong as the plot thickens. The adaptation to radioplay works very well; kudos.
09-18-2009, 12:46 AM
Alriight, bout time I got this done. 8D
majia: GAME voice-- You sound so ridiculously cool in this. ;_; I like the cool and professional feel of your voice, it fits a computer voice well. |D
HatomiKazuki: Emma Rose-- I hardly ever hear you in a girly role, and so I'm really glad I could hear you in this one! The scream was absolutely amazing. I'm really impressed with this!
Tamekichi: Daniel-- I do like the tone of your voice, it sounds quite nice. I get the feeling that you do sound like bninjah, but I have a feeling that's for a reason. >D I think while you're supposed to have a empty personality, it would still be worth thinking about the levels in your speech anyways, because at time it felt a bit flat.
XTREEMAK: Johnny-- Oh maaan, I think you know from anything I've posted on Dies Irae that I'm such a huge, huge fan of your voice. It's got an amazing texture. *__* Anyways. I loved your performance as always, you've definitely got the vibe of the character down.
dragonknighttara: Lyre-- I'm loving your voice as well! It's very smooth and you and XTREEMAK sound great together. I really like the subtleties in the voice and how it changes when Lea mentions the GAME, where you can hear the change but it's not overblown.
bninjah: Leander-- I love your line about Jeopardy and trying to kick Daniel out, I think that was one of the lines that hit the mark exactly. You may have added a bit more attitude on some lines where he's being snarky, but overall I think you've got his vibe down well. 8D
~xXLittlexGurlXx~: Lea-- You sound so cute. |D I think that the end of your part was definitely the best, it made me go all D: I think that some of the lines felt like she was describing someone who was still alive because it didn't carry anough impact. Apart from that though, you sound really good. *_*
Sera Phia-- ...8'D
LittleStar: ACiDiA- One liner, but you sound badass. I want to hear more of you soon~ *__*
Mixing-wise, I think that sometimes the lines faded out too quickly, but I think it was okay. I thought the interrogation scene's transition was really, really good and smooth. I personally thought that some of the lines could have some variation in the space where they were placed, if that makes any sense? I sometimes get the feeling that everytime someone replies to someone, there's always the same amount of time between them that sounds a bit mechanical at times.
Overall, I'm looking forward to the next episode! I've got no qualms about the plot, but the transition is very nice from short story to radioplay, like Y Chang said. 8D
09-19-2009, 04:05 AM
This is a fascinating story you have here. I can't wait to hear what happens next from this? Quite a brutal story too. Fratricide is not something you expect from a story like this.
Mixing was stellar. Other than a couple of sound effects missing here and there there's no real flaws, you set the mood marvelously and you gave this sense of the world being alive and fleshed-out. It's obvious you put effort into this. Great work in general.
Maija: I don't know how you're able to talk like this but major props for being able to do so.
Hato: Wow, this was amazing! You definitely sound like a realistic 13-year-old girl! The way you switched from the more casual and annoyed Emma Rose to someone unnerved and then terrifying was very realistic and well-done, and quite a marvelous scream as well. You've never lacked for emotion.
Tamekichi: I think a couple of your lines fell flat but in general you sounded quite good. But there seemed to be something missing a lot of the time, like you couldn't quite make the character come alive, you made Daniel impenetrable. Maybe that was intentional?
XTREEMAK: More proof on how much you pwn these types of roles. Scene-stealer, big time.
Tara: I really liked the no-nonsense but collected voice you used here. Great delivery, I liked how you handled the conversation with Lea too, it was a major shift from how she talked to Johnny and you did it well.
Mongtsatsa: Other than mic quality there's no real flaws here. Your simfoni/Erica sounds so normal and casual, which was the intention here so good job with that. But I like the brattiness in your voice too. XD Good job here.
brinjah: Oddly enough, the same comments about Daniel apply here. Something was missing that made the performance a bit forced and awkward. Now I'm definitely wondering if it was intentional on both your parts.
LittleGurl: One of the most adorable voices I've heard on the VAA ever. Then again, considering your username . . . XD But really, this was great all-around, especially when she began to cry. So realistic and sympathetic.
Littlestar: Sounds a little spunkier and older than the usual voice you do, but I need to hear more before I can critique you.
Sera Phia: Well, you sound like a lot of completely different people on the TV, so congratulations on that, you did a great job with that.
I can't wait to hear more from this and see where this goes!
09-19-2009, 11:49 AM
I really love what I'm hearing so far! I'll come up with a full critique later. =)
12-04-2009, 08:13 PM
FFFFFF-EXPLODES
YES~ Listening now. Will write a critique later
12-04-2009, 09:08 PM
Okay, so I took time off scripting Eternal Genesis to give this a listen and here are my thoughts.
Hatomikazuki as Emma Rose: Not a lot of lines but I liked I heard ^ ^
TriPredRavage as Daniel Bourne: Nice job on making the character your own! Your performance was actually pretty good. I'll admit the first few lines were a bit dodgy and lacked emotion, but aside from those few lines, the rest of the performance was a blast.
Majia as The GAME Voice: Majia, again good performance in this phase. Your manner of speaking in this role reminds of Aigis from Persona 3 xD Also I felt that the balance of realism and robotic was shifted more on the side of realism in this phase. I think there may have been a few times you quickly slipped out of the robotic-ness. But that's a minor thing, this is me nitpicking xD
Mongtsatsa as Erica Speare: Your performance was better this time around. Not that you were bad in the last phase, but the performance was improved. I heard some better deliveries in emotions in this phase.
bninjah as Leander Spear: Ha, you had a lot of energy in this phase and made me chuckle a few times on some of your lines xD
DragonKnightTara as Lyre Prescott: Great stuff here. Your intelligent tone carried over from the first Phase and we got to hear some more varied emotions from you which were delivered nicely!
XTREEMAK as Johnny Smith: Man, the deepness of your voice never ceases to amaze me! I thought this was a fairly good performance ^ ^
~xXLittlexGurlXx~ as Lea Tory: Not many lines here, but as with Hatomikazuki, I liked what I heard here. I really liked the line: "Emma Rose…you made me cry so much…you’re so going to pay." I thought it was done really well.
McTricky as DreadX: On the level, I don't think I did that bad. Although I know I can proabably do a lot better than that. Considering I recorded these lines AGES ago, I guess should've re-done them. I think I might listen back on my Phase III lines and redo 'em. And urgh...that damned headset mic...glad it's broken now D<
LittleStar as ACiDiA: I liked your energy in this role, but then again, you always have energy in everything I hear you in xD
Mixing by Sera Phia: Well Serah, this sure was a blast to listen to. What a way to come back from the dead, eh?
The music choices were good for the most part. But some parts had music unfitting to the scene/dialogue. Namely the scene where Daniel and Lender are having their in-depth conversation, I felt the music was a bit too upbeat. I hear After Midnight in this and I was like: "YESSSS~" Love that song xD And the way you cut it up to time it up with the scene was excellent. The timing was on point.
Speaking of music, there were a few parts where it proved difficult to hear the VAs over the music. Especially the upbeat ones.
Sound effects were all mixed well, which seems to be something you're improving greatly on. I noticed a dialogue error somewhere with the scene with Johnny and Lyre. I was reading the script whilst listening to this, that's how I was able to notice it.
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But that aside, great work with this. I really liked the ending of these phase. Really epic~ Can't wait for the next phase, Serah!
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Originally Posted by Y. Chang
, so I haven't gotten around to mixing it yet. Definitely will start next week, when things calm down. ^^
