Chibi_Riki's Summer/Fall 2009 Demo (Now with BGM~! <33)

[Chibi_riki]

Hiyaaaaaa~!
I've been meaning to do a new demo for the passed 9 months now, but today I FINALLY got around to doing it!! XDDD

I tried to do as many voices as I could while still making it within reasonable time. I just hope I showcased off enough voices~ >w<

As of now there is no background music for it seeing as I need to add some... >>

I'll be updating this with a demo with music as soon as I can~ :3 But for now, enjoy my newest demo~ <333

No Music

EDIT: Got it with music now~ <333

Yay Demo~!

Comments and constructive criticism is love~ <333

[hyperknees91]

Well that was interesting to say the least.

Your best voice was actually your very first one I thought and the "would saying I love you" because I felt that they had good energy and emotion.

However several other voices felt kinda awkward "His power level is off the charts" felt like you were trying to force a more raspy voice and it took away from your energy. The voice directly after that was better though.

Then came the middle which was the weakest part. This was mostly due to most of your voices being inaudible or your tone shifting downward as you talked with them. I know you were trying to portray calmer characters, but you want your voice to be heard don't you? Mixing would probably fix most of this though.

Your cry was pretty decent but I think you could've made yourself sound even sadder. But a good effort here.

Seems like your current strength is in high pitched voices as you seem much more comfortable with them, so try to work on the medium voices a bit more.

I liked it though, hopefully I'll see more from you soon.

[Chibi_riki]

Hmm~? <3
Maybe I'll re-do it, then~ I actually thought my emotion/voice was a bit off/weak for a couple lines but I was so excited to get a new demo out that I just said "SCREW IT!" and posted it~ >XDDD

I know I need to work on my lower voice~ >X'D I'm always cast with my higher voices so I'm much more used to them~ <33

I honestly have no idea why my volume got lower in the middle D: It might be as you say, and I was speaking lower... >< I guess I'll have to work on adjusting audio volumes~ >XD Hehe~

<33 Thank you for the critique~ <333

[hyperknees91]

Nah you don't got to redo it (god I feel bad people seem to always want to redo their demo after I comment). I mean for the most part it was fine, I was just pointing out that theres room for improvement.

Don't worry about rushing though, these things take time(The wisest four's T's of advice I can give).

[Chibi_riki]

Well, I dunno about anyone else, but when I KNOW there's something wrong with something I do (Homework or voice acting) I won't be happy until it's perfected >X'D

And, besides, I planned I re-doing it anyway. Mainly because there's a line or two that I already felt should have had stronger emotion, and because I noticed the volume on a couple lines got lower for some odd reason >X'D Though, I probably won't re-do it right away becauase, alas, it's good enough and I am lazy... .w.

[Koichi_Saito]

I think your high voice reminds me of Navi from the Legend of Zelda series. Heh heh! XD I think you'd make a great Navi!

"Hey! Listen!"

[mystyxiii]

I think your high voice reminds me of Navi from the Legend of Zelda series. Heh heh! XD I think you'd make a great Navi!

"Hey! Listen!"

Oh...Navi...*bug spray*

Right! Critique-y goodness.

Your voice, much like mine, sounds as if it would be better suited for the medium-high range voices. Which is fine, with us around there'll never be a shortage of obnoxious 7 year old girls bent on world domination...or something. The "his power level has spiked" line sounded as if...if you were asked to play, say Trunks, you wouldn't be able to keep it up. I liked it overall, it just sound like you couldn't maintain the consistency if you needed to. I think my biggest point is going to come from the mixing. It was all over the place. The SFX were lovely and so was the music, the problem was that the over all audio quality fluctuated terribly. One second it was quite loud, the next I was having to turn up the speakers if only to hear what was going on, only have to hurriedly turn it down so as not to blow out my eardrums. Oh headphones.

I hope this helps in any shape, form, or fashion.