Corey Lucas Character Demo Reel 09

[Zangetsu55]

Here my Demo.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfmZHpY4-80"]YouTube - Corey Lucas: Character Demo Reel 2009[/ame]


Be Nice. Critique if you want.

[hyperknees91]

Not bad, but theres some room for improvement.

One thing that might help though is your microphone kept cracking while you were acting (it wasn't terrible but if you could adjust it that would be great).

The first sounded like it was suppose to be really excited but it didn't give me that feeling at all and actually came out to be rather apathetic sounding. The same thing occured for the "I don't like that stuff" and the "Im hungry" voice. It felt kinda flat and rather forced at time.

The more serious voices you did were better though because they felt alot more natural and not so forced. Your laugh wasn't bad but could use a bit more work (try to sound more sinister if you can).

Your best voices by far was the guy whose lines sounded like poetry (both him and the australian accent guy after him). Only thing is that it felt like you kinda lost it as you went on, but it started out great for both. So just more takes on saying the lines would fix that.

Anyway good job just keep practicing!

[Zangetsu55]

Part 2

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQ6sAfPaxys"]YouTube - Corey Lucas: Character Demo Reel 2009[/ame]