Narrator/Mindy: I really liked the way you delivered you're lines. Although "He's flying!! Mog was able to do it!" seemed a little held back to me. Now, I've never played or watched anything final fantasy related so I wouldn't be completely sure about that. But other then that, no real complaints. Great job.
Squall/Scott: Great Squall you gave. Especially when you were aggitated, Lol. Although you only had a few lines I did enjoy them.
Rinoa/Fairuza: This wasn't what I was expecting for Rinoa. It seemed like you tried to sound very soft and playful, but it came off a bit unnatural. Although I did really enjoy your performance. ^^
Squall/Scott: I liked your lines alot. But there was a line or two that I thought could use some work. Which was, "Approach your targets inconspicuously at a dance party..(and so forth)" I felt you could have made you're lines flow a bit more smoothly if it wasn't for the fast text, Lol. Other then that, nothing else to pick at really. 8D
Rinoa/Fairuza: Since clip 2 you've gotten a lot better. Some lines were rushed, but I could see why, since the text is a bit fast in parts. I did start to warm up to your take on her. So great job~
Zone/Menchi: I did like you're tone for this character, but I think the delivery could have been a bit better.
Watts/Jack: Very energetic sounding, which I liked most about your performance, but like Menchi, it needs some work. Great job though.
Selphie/Cirno: You're voice was pretty bouncy, and I felt it was a little overdone, but needless to say, your take on her was cute.
Zell/Jared: I think overall you were my favorite in these clips. Although you didn't say much, I really thought you gave the best performance.
Clip 4: (Part one)
Zidane/Koichi: Most of you're lines we're fighting lines, so I can't really critique on that. Although I think you could have worked on the parts where Zidane was getting worked up/yelling. Good job none the less.
Rusty/???: I honestly don't know who voiced this character, but... I liked the tone and such but noticed on you're yelling/shouting lines you seemed to hold back. It just really didn't sound natural. I enjoyed most of your lines though.
Dagger/Homicidal: Same problem as Rusty. You need to work on your shouting lines. Although they came off a little dull you did make up for it in the long run.
(Waiting on part 2)
Mixing overall: There was many parts where sfx were missing, and the quality wasn't as good, but it was simple and very nice. So I give you props on that.