Eternal Genesis: The Radioplay [Chapter 9: Nocturnal Runnings]

[McTricky]

And the blooper reel is finished. Happy nao!? D<

Nah, seriously, it IS done, and you can find it on the first post.

[Heaven Incarnate]

For the lawls.

[Z-Che Chan]

Dr. Who!!!! <3! O.m.g please send me that ringtone!!

[McTricky]

Chapter 8 is out people!! ;D

[TriPredRavage]

Woo!! I'll have to listen to it later!!

[ConVito]

Yessss. I'll take a listen once I get out of class.

[ConVito]

Kurtis Artica :: McTricky - I think this is the first time I've really heard you in a role. I've heard small bits before but not really enough to get an idea of how you sound. Now I've heard enough of your voice and I must say, it's really cool. You've got a rough but dignified quality, though it could just be your accent (I'm American, any accent besides mine sounds cool lol). But I really liked how you sound and I can't wait to hear more.

David Romero :: ConVito - It's weird, when I hear myself in the radioplay, my voice always sounds lower than when I recorded my lines. It's like an illusion for the ears. I'm pretty satisfied with how I sounded, but I'm starting to think I should try and get my voice higher for the role in the future. Does anyone else agree, or am I just paranoid?

Emerson Noyes :: TriPredRavage - I think we sounded less alike this time around lol. Every time I hear one of these, I'm happy that you were cast last minute as Emerson. You really make the character. No that's not a sentence fragment.

Metra Sylar :: Zellie - David and Emerson were lucky in this episode. I bet David was in pure bliss. But seriously, if Metra's appearance even slightly matches the sexiness of your voice, then I don't think David will forget that sight anytime soon.

Zenith :: Gavaroc Fevinor - It sounded slightly forced, very slightly. But the character immersion was totally there. You sounded great, and I'd love to hear you narrate some epic Lord of the Rings style thingy lol.

Amalia Winters :: Sera Phia - Lovely as always. You've always been really good at conveying emotion as Amalia, but honestly, you just keep getting better, and this episode is proof of that. Though if you could put a little more force behind your fighting sounds, it would really complete it, at least I think so.

Eisen Gaia :: ConVito - Poor Eisen, another one-liner. Why do I get the feeling that

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he's probably going to die soon?

Hatchet Barons :: Jackskellinghog - I love the short-fuse quality of your voice. You make Hatchet seem like someone I'd never want to get mad. He seems reckless, but badass.

Guards (extras) :: McTricky, TeenKing12 - I think I heard McTricky here, but I don't remember TeenKing12, sorry. If I did, it probably wasn't really enough for a full critique.

Mixing: McTricky - Nice as always. Sometimes it seems like this was supposed to be animated or something, since I notice there are quite a few pauses where nobody talks but there's just background noise. Other times, the pauses between scenes can get a little long, but that's minor. You put the series together really well, and I'm proud to be a part of it.

[DarkKnightGrave]

*Goes through the entire series so far* Hmm....A most interesting series. I will give a full critque of the series later but I will say this.....

Dispite the anime cliches, this is a fairly enjoyable and action packed shonen radioplay. The characters need to be more fleshed out just a little more but the story is still starting and the actors are entertaining so that is very minor. ^_^ Overall, enjoyable and quite interesting.

[Andieluca]

yay! giving it a listen right now. ^^

[TriPredRavage]

Just finished giving it a listen. I'm not going to do a full critique, but I'll comment on some things.

Sera Phia - you sounded completely different in this chapter than I think you've sounded int he past. I thought you sounded wonderful (not because I thought you sounded bad in the past, but) there was something in your performance (be it your emotion or something else) that I felt like me heart broke everytime you spoke.

Mixing wise I felt like I was really expecting something different in this chapter than what you put out. I was expecting a bit more comedic effects than what the final product had, which I thought was really interesting. I think the BEST moment of mixing though (which I completely didn't expect) was when Emerson started zoning out in Metra's room and Amalia's "Because I love you" played in the backround. Awesome.

My only real complaint was that I wish you had gotten somebody else to play that extra role because I got a little confused as I thought Curtis said that line when I knew it was a guard. But, then again, you played a guard in chapter 2, so, continuity-wise it worked.

But speaking of continuity; I have a few questions:

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1. Why don't Kurtis and Lilly have the same accent?
2. I thought Eisen was Emerson's roommate. When they were all teleported back to their rooms in Chapter 7, where did Eisen go?
3. In Chapter 5, Emerson wakes up after being asleep for 15 days, but in Chapter 8, Zenith says that anyone revived by Amalia will die 15 days later. So, this must mean that Emerson was Super Revived!!
4. If Emerson had never met Lilly (as said in Chapter 7), how did he know to think about her in Chapter 3 when looking for someone to teach guitar to Yuuji?

All things I should have brought up before, but... didn't think about it until recently