YAY. I'm a little late, but here's a critique:
Emerson Noyes :: TriPredRavage: You are the official Emerson. Overall, you're just...EMERSON. In all capitals. Yes.
David Romero :: ConVito: Same comment with TPR above. I really liked hearing you play a more down character this time around due to the tragedy and etc., though. c: Also, we finally got to hear some epic-David-skills. (But what about my meal!?)
Kurtis Artica :: McTricky: I've really warmed up to your voice as this character, it seems very fitting and really, very McTricky-ish. Great job, and I think your enunciation has improved much!
Titania Noyes :: Andieluca: I really like your voice, Andie! Although it sounded a bit young to be a college student's mother, you did really well. Just work a bit on the enunciation and a tad more on the acting - some of the lines felt awkwardly delivered. But I'm glad to have you on board in our EG cast!
Neighbour :: Hatty: OMG EMERGENCY. Nice job, the acting was great!
Miya Kanzaki :: LittleStar: I've missed you, LittleStar! Your character was very fun and bratty to listen to, and it actually reminded me of Felicity from The GAME...(nostalgia...)
Serene Auger :: FadedPhantom: I naturally envy every female who can manage a voice like that. You pulled off the serious character very well.
Kagetsu Aichi :: Artemis Wasabi: You're back! 8D I really like your soft, yet somehow strong voice for this. Often you slurred your words a little, but other than that, you performed excellently.
Empréna :: Kennidy: Kennidy! I'm so glad to hear your voice in EG, this just automatically makes the project so much better. It's also pretty great hearing you using your non-moe voice for this character. As usual, you're an amazing actress. Ahmazing job! I just hope we get to see you more.
Mixing: Things are really starting to heat up! Like others have said, I really like the music you used in this chapter (VERSUS XIII. HAPPY.) To be honest, the entire thing had this Fire Emblem feel to it - maybe because Emerson's mother's name is Titania. The battle still felt extraordinarly epic (Kurtis vs. Emprena = just...wow) and the entire thing had great balance with background and the voices of our main characters, and overall I've no complaints! Excellent job as usual.
(I'll applaud you also on the scripting and dialogue, too.)
Great job for chapter nine! Let's get this into chapter ten soon, okay, Tricky? ;D (With Amalia plz.)
Originally Posted by McTricky
