FLUR - [Update: Blades of the Universe]

[XTREEMMAK]

~FLUR~
Created By: Jamaal "XTREEMMAK" Ephriam

Welcome to the official VAA post for project FLUR! Here, all current and future FLUR productions shall be posted and updated here! Notice the headline post. The headline will always reflect the status of the most currently updated FLUR series.

~What is FLUR?~
FLUR; the instance in which we forget ourselves and our lives and trade them in for that of a persona; a mask on life to which all are fooled by its smile. To wense all lives are guided to love, happiness, strength, turmoil, life, death, destruction, chaos, prosperity, despair and all that within. For them, never to cherish the many languages that coincide life in itself; life's lessons, cultures, teachings, and experiences. Thus they plummet into darkness. However, to those who regain the ability of appreciation; to those that are able to remove the mask, they will become the gleaming light that will fight the surrounding darkness. They will once again be known as people; individuals with an independent mind. Individuals that will through any trials presented by the darkness, stop at nothing to guide others to the radiant treasure they have found; self actualization.

A story ends but FLUR does not considering the stories surrounding FLUR are almost limitless; some extreme, and others minor. Join us as we delve into the inner workings of these distorted worlds. Will you be able to understand the importance of these stories?

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GUNS OF THE HIDDEN MINDS
[MATURE CONTENT WARNING]

SYNOPSIS
Dry... An understatement gathered by the conditions of Earth. Within this huge sandbox that would seem to last forever, awaits it’s children. Outlaws, bandits, thieves; corrupt individuals who have given up their humanities to the sun. Thus, their minds have already plummeted to hell whilst their bodies remain in which the rares called "the innocent" rue the days of their presence. A time where even the word justice felt so…dry. Dry is the innocence of most children where obtaining the status of merchandise is as common as the sand. Dry is the compassion of most women where it would seem their hearts have all turned green. And so, to all we ask this question. Where might these, the children of the sand, find a drink. The answer, when he comes, you shall thirst no more.


Episode 1

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BLADES OF THE UNIVERSE
[MATURE CONTENT WARNING]

SYNOPSIS
Lida Garuzo always considered herself as a normal girl, living her last few days as a high school student, always living her days through a schedule, day in and day out. However, her life suddenly takes a dramatic turn when the unexpected event of a missed placed bus ticket sends this normal teen on an adventure unlike any other. It is then she sees that her life isn’t as normal as she originally thought.

Episode 1

Episode 2

Episode 3

[Zankoku no Yami]

First!

Okay, while I wait for the second scene to allow me to actually download it, I'll reply on the first scene.

I just have to say... you totally kick ARSE at this! First radioplay? Make me look like am amataur *sweatdrop* the mixing was perfect. I really not a single complaint. Not to mention the right touch of music and sfx. I couldnt find anything to really critique. The music, by the bye, is amazing itself. Damn, wish I had your musical talent for Dies Irae! You would have made some of the scenes thus far way more powerful simply due to the high quality of original music that was made specifically for those scenes. I really have nothing more to say on the mixing... it truly amazes me. Makes me envious *sweatdrop*

The scripting is also just on par with the rest of the production. Love the dialogue and how nicely it flows~

As far as voice talent goes, I am very suprised with the energy and talent pumped out in this scene! Especially fairuza's performances. The Hero and Sean in particular. I think these two really stood out on the emotional sides. But all in all, everyone did a wonderful job and I nothing to really critique~ but then again, its not my best filed at critiquing. But still, great either way!

Now to wait for scene 2 to let me download it... but thus far, I am drawn in! Had me confused for a bit, but only because I am easily confused when thrown into something like that. But now I have to know what happens next~

Edit:

So, yeah. Same thing said for scene 1 goes for scene 2. A bit slower paced; but done VERY well. Kept my interest and intrique. I REALLY love the scene with the waitress and how you played out the 'slow motion bullet' effect was AMAZING. I had to give it a second listen at first but went 'OH! Slow motion right?'. But nonetheless, that waitress is SCARY. Then the scene out in the wind/sand storm between you and Conor was really awesome too. LOVED the voice act by both of you. Druox really protrayed this dislutional man well. I love how you played him. I could actually see your reactions.

Gah! All the conversations were perfect and the SFX were well enough placed that you could see the entire thing. And now... its over. Gah! Got me all sucked in and now I wonder whats going to happen. The plot and way the story is gone about is very visual and unique, I think. And well, I love western themes. Really kind of at a lost of what to say. I loved it all, seriously. To put it frankly; voice acting was right on que. Repsersenting the characters in a rather lively way. SFX put you right into the scene and story, painting a very vivid picture. And dialogue sucks you right in. Its all so vivid I wish i could see it instead of just hearing it~ but then again, i might not appreciate all the SFX if that were the case.

Simply put. Kick arse.

Looking forward to the next episode~!

[fairuza]

Wow,when I first heard both clips I thought...WOW!! That rocks!
Seriously,everything sounded perfect. From the voice acting to the sfx and music choices. These clips were very well produced in a beautifully executed manner and while I was listening,it was easy for me to picture a visual with how everything came together. The effects from the slow mo to the impacting screaming scenes with some of the characters really got me in an adrenaline rush and become overly engaged with these clips even more. Action packed and never a dull moment.

Voice Performance Wise: Everything felt very smooth,performance wise and I felt that every actor knew where they were going with their characters and did an amazing job with delivering a very realistic performance sounding very professional as well! I had a wonderful time voicing Hero,Sean and The Waitress. I must admit,the waitress scares me to no end but that's why I loved playing her so much.XD

Script: Extraordinary! I didn't noticed anything that seems conjointed or awkward which was impressive. I felt that everything seemed to have a soul and realistic feel from the Characters to the situations and even the roles they were given. Beautiful job once again and I'm extremely impressed that this is your first RP. Keep it up,can't wait for part 2 and I definately can't wait to work with you again!

[KimiLynn]

This was fantastic! Quite epic actually! Everything was mixed wonderfully and the music and scripting flawless. The acting, no complaints there =) Not much I can say that hasn't already been said...I really enjoyed it ^^. Very original story.

It was a little confusing at parts, like I wasn't sure what was going on, but I think It became pretty clear in the end =)

Can't wait to hear what's next and to get started on BofTU

[DragonBoy]

Glad I could be part of this! I loved every moment!

[snowfender]

i am kind of echoing everyone else but this mixing was phenomenal in this! sound effects and music were absolutely professional. i love the script and the plot- it's so intense. the scenes were so incredibly DRAMATIC.. i loved them xD

the voice acting was pretty awesome! i loved fairuza in this production. she did freaking AMAZING in all her parts. <3 the only nitpick is really of myself... i kinda wish my boy-voice could have been more boy-ish and some of my emotions seemed awkward. but seriously, amazing job mixing, script-wise, and voicing. wonderfully done and can't wait for more! =D

[McTricky]

I took the time to listen to this. Great stuff! The voices and accents were very convincing and kept me captive to listen. Fairuza did a great job with the Waitress role and Usako did well with her roles as Miranda Serin. Can't find any faults mixing-wise. Great work everyone! ;D

[Zankoku no Yami]

Bump!

Come on people! More of you really got to listen to this~

[XTREEMMAK]

Thanks Zank

[Sera Phia]

I'll listen to this soon~ I listened to the beginning part, and it sounded awesome so far!