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Kudos for the excellent editing.
My biggest observation is that this sounds a lot like an old english dub of a shōnen show (which it is). That's both good and bad.

It's good in that that you successfully managed to replicate a vocal style.

However, the old dubs of cliched shōnen shows are unnaturally voiced at best, and display poor acting skills at worst.
Words and phrases are marked by unnatural emphasis, and the tone never changes according to the neuances of natural speech.

MaxinMaytrix- Excellent duplication of style, your voice wit the part well in terms of range and tone. However, the "yelling" as he was attacking fellt like you were whispering loudly, and therefore, unnatural.

Sakasa Jin'ei- You had the appropriate vocal range, but your voice had a "nasal" quality to it. When the character was worked up in the beginning and elsewhere where the lines were meant to be loud, it felt especially unnatural.

Overally, though, like I said, the editing was great and you matched the old shōnen style well.

[Mindychan]

Hey! Nice to see another Ranma project

Practice makes perfect and I think you're going in the right direction. There were only a few parts where the emotion felt a little off or flat but you guys were warming up. Maybe more Ranma/Ryoga clips in the future then? Those are always good fun to watch, anyways.

The mixing was great! The background music's volume could have been increased a bit more to follow with the action happening on screen.

Good job you two! I thought both of you did well in your roles.