Well, you defiantly have an impressive vocal range!
Your Neon lines both had quite a few puffs in there. ^^;; I also have to agree that you Lucy and Takano sounded kind of a like. Your emotion delivery was great! I loved the characters you choose! But I'd say remove the list of characters. Once people see that list, they auto-maticly want to compare your voice with the orginal. And I don't think you want that. The main point of the demo is to show off the range [and to which you did]. 8D; Over all, great job<33.