[Waffle] Hare + Guu :: Episode 16 - Part 1

[Sasuya]

Waffle Face Productions

Hare + Guu - Episode 16
"Sleeping Together"

Part 1

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Cast (Order of Appearance)

Clive: bninjah
Mari: Brooke Lynn
Guu: Vesper
Hare: HatomiKazuki

Credits:
Hare + Guu OST
Soundsnap
freesound.org
pacdv

Mixing: Sasuya

Part 1 is out, whooo! The cast and I worked hard putting the first part together, so any comments and critiques would be appreciated. Enjoy! ^^

[Hatomikazuki]

Ooh~ Fun! >3
Here's my review/critique /what not so far:
Clive: bninjah: You fit him really well, my only issue was there were a few times it seemed like you were trying too hard to give him a 'sophisticated,' or condescending tone. You tended to have a certain vocal pattern that you applied to the vast majority of his 'casual' lines, making them sound monotonous in delivery (not in actual tone...If that makes sense?). Overall, really great job with him, and I really look forward to hearing more from you as the episode goes on (when he starts to get freaked out and what not~<3).
Mari: Brooke Lynn: Daw, Brooke, you're so freaking cute. You played Mari really well, and did an excellent job with making her sound like she was taking everything extremely seriously. Nice job!
Guu: Vesper: Oh god...Really really great. You fit Guu wonderfully, and I loved the sort of slyness you gave her. Keep it up, and I look forward to hearing more from you~
Hare: HatomiKazuki: GRR. >D

Mixing: It sounds nice; my only issue was sometimes the subtitles were cropped weirdly, and it was a bit distracting; there's not really much remedy for that...But...^^'' They were kind of irritating.

Overall, great job so far everyone! >D I really want to see more. <3 (I love this show to bits, and the cast so far is doing a great job with it~)

[majia]

Overall, I really enjoyed this! I had a great time listening to the cast (which is amazing) and the mixing was great as well.

Cast:
Clive: bninjah-
Awesome job, I honestly have no complaints, you did a great as Clive!

Mari: Brooke Lynn-
I love your Mari Lynn!!!! You sounded so cute and you did such a great job with her emotions as well, awesome job!

Guu: Vesper-
Honestly, I have to say your voicing for Guu was just too good. The moment you came on it was just too...well when i figure out how to describe how awesome your voice was i'll let you know xD but you fit Guu to a T and I have no complaints, amazing job and I can't wait to hear more from ya!

Hare: HatomiKazuki
We only head you a little bit Hatomi, but from what I heard you sounded great. Ha your grrr made me laugh. Great job!

Congrats to the cast and great job everyone, I really can't wait to see what else is in store! Good job Sasuya you deserve just as much praise!

[Battousai]

Wow, this came out pretty fast!

bninjah: You make a very good Clive. As Hatomi said, sometimes I think you were trying a bit too hard to make him sound a certain way, but it wasn't natural to me. But I still think you are a great fit for the character and look forward to more in the other clips!

Brooke Lynn: You sounded very cute and did a nice job as her!

Vesper: I love your Guu. It's exactly what I envisioned her sounding like.

HatomiKazuki: There really wasn't much for me to judge, so I can't really say much of anything... for now!

Mixing was pretty good. Most of the lip flaps synced fine with the lines - except for a few occasions here and there. SFX and BGM were both pretty good. The video quality is extremely meh though - especially because it's sort of obvious you cut out the subtitles with mixed results. It'd be much better if you could use RAWs... of course. ^_^

[xSPADEofHEART]

*0* Nice job Sasuya! I'll just echo other people's comments on the cast.>D And I do agree that the subs bothered me a bit, but it's understandable considering Hare+Guu is a kinda old series.XD There IS a way to get rid of subs nicely as long as you have a mkv of the file..=x

Great job everyone~!

[Sasuya]

Thanks you guys.

Yeah, the subtitles >.< There really isn't any other way for me to get rid of those. It's either have the subtitles completely there, have them kind of there, or chop the whole video o_o. If I try to get rid of the subtitles completely the whole video is reduced to a single bar, lol. And I looked for RAWS but couldn't find them D:

Thanks for all of your comments guys ^^

[EKYO]

Clive: bninjah -- You've got a great voice for Clive, though the delivery of certain lines seemed slightly forced. Still, I thought you did a very good job!

Mari: Brooke Lynn -- Your voice suits her very well and the "passionate romantic" tone was excellent. Sooo cute~

Guu: Vesper -- :U The sly, devious tone made me a little nervous... I love it. You're a super Guu.

Hare: HatomiKazuki -- "GRR!" I can't wait to hear more of you, so I can actually say something! 8D

Mixing -- Nice job, Sasuya! I liked it, despite you having to work with a subtitled copy of the clip.

Overall, it was sa-weet. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

[LittleStar]

Wow, this is so awesome! I'm dying of the cuteness *___* You sure finished this pretty quick, Sasuya~. Anyway, I really loved this, and I have nothing to critique other then what's already been said, so great job everyone~!

[Sasuya]

Yus. I like to get things done quickly =) Thanks for your comments guys ~

[Brooke Lynn]

This turned out great! The mixing was awesome, the only downer was the subtitles. The cursed subtitles that cannot be helped, rawr! Lol. As for the voices, bninjah and Vesper did great. I haven't heard anything from Vesper before and now I must hear more!!! I'm excited to hear the rest of the cast and see this finished. Good job everyone!