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  1. #1 Stained - Part II 
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    Dark Scribes & B Squared Present:
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    Starring Sasuya, VoiceBox, Mochan, Dymatrex & sonicmega
    Created by Mochan and VoiceBox
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    Part I - Sight Vs. Sound
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    Part II - Wanted
    (Approx. 12 minutes)

    Disclaimer: Voices have been changed due to a recent change of heart in the script.

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    Art by Koinu Yukina


    The Musician Ver. 1 (Rough Sketch)
    The Musician Ver. 2 (Rough Sketch)
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    Written by VoiceBox
    Edited by Mochan
    Concept Art by Koinu
    Mixed by VoiceBox
    Sound effects by VoiceBox
    Music done by AZ, Fujimoto Tetsuro, hhonda and VoiceBox
    The Musician played by Sasuya
    The Sailor played by Dymatrex
    The Blind Swordsmen played by VoiceBox
    The Elderly Man played by VoiceBox
    The Elderly Woman played by Mochan
    Extras played by sonicmega, Dymatrex and VoiceBox

    "Strangers"
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    I lurve what we've created. I really love the way it's mixed. I really, really love the cast the most, though. Everyone did such a fantastic job. =D
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    This... was.. AMAZING =D

    Everything was well put together. I really loved the music, it had a kind of cool feeling to it. It kind of reminded me of Samurai Champloo. It definitely hits the right note for the beginning of the story =) I want to write a critique but I can't really say much, everyone sounded great! Although I think my emotion was flat. The only comments I really want to make is the volume. It felt like sometimes the music was really overpowering the voices. Also, I think the volume of my voices should have been louder. Or maybe that was the fault of my mic >.> oops. Anyway, really loved it! And it was just in time for Christmas too. Absolutely loved it VoiceBox X3
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sasuya View Post
    This... was.. AMAZING =D

    Everything was well put together. I really loved the music, it had a kind of cool feeling to it. It kind of reminded me of Samurai Champloo. It definitely hits the right note for the beginning of the story =) I want to write a critique but I can't really say much, everyone sounded great! Although I think my emotion was flat. The only comments I really want to make is the volume. It felt like sometimes the music was really overpowering the voices. Also, I think the volume of my voices should have been louder. Or maybe that was the fault of my mic >.> oops. Anyway, really loved it! And it was just in time for Christmas too. Absolutely loved it VoiceBox X3
    Yes, I've already been scolded by Mo for the overpowering thing. XD The funny part is, I had the music at the perfect volume when I was originally making the piece but before it was uploaded I gave the music a little boost. That's my bad on that one.

    And I agree with Mo! I love my cast with all my heart! The green smiley represents my cast and of course the red one being me...showing my love and whatnot. <3
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    That was pretty cool! And Sasuya's Japanese is superb! (Although I don't speak Japanese and have no idea if she was actually saying any of that right.) And throughout the whole thing I thought the Sailor was played by Voicebox, Dymatrex made himself sound really different then his usual, I really thought that he was Voicebox the whole time. (Cause I know you're kind of voice and it sounded similar.) This was awesome!

    (I'll give a better critique later.)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mrwest16 View Post
    That was pretty cool! And Sasuya's Japanese is superb! (Although I don't speak Japanese and have no idea if she was actually saying any of that right.) And throughout the whole thing I thought the Sailor was played by Voicebox, Dymatrex made himself sound really different then his usual, I really thought that he was Voicebox the whole time. (Cause I know you're kind of voice and it sounded similar.) This was awesome!

    (I'll give a better critique later.)
    Yeah, Dymatrex plays the sailor in the very beginning and the thug towards the end.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mrwest16 View Post
    That was pretty cool! And Sasuya's Japanese is superb! (Although I don't speak Japanese and have no idea if she was actually saying any of that right.)
    Yeah, I wouldn't really know either =0 I can't really speak Japanese and I think my accent and pronunciation was off ^^; I'm not really sure if I said some of the words right either XD
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by VoiceBox View Post
    Yeah, Dymatrex plays the sailor in the very beginning and the thug towards the end.
    Oh... so I was right? I heard you the whole time, my sister thought that the main male chracter was Dymatrex.

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    Giovanni/King Kai/Super Nerd/Clone Troopers/Gangsta Goten/ Announcer/Gay man/Man Announcing Numbers/Redneck Gohan/School Interviewer/Giru/Mikal Bene/Rya/ Narrator(FS)/ Luke and Lon/Don Ki/Micro Man/Garcia/Church/Saverous/Cheering Crowd/Head Ghost/BANSHEE/Ollivander/Donovon the Mole/Mysterious Hedgehog/Yakuza Thug # 2/Takeuchi/Black Doom/Jim McGuffin the Weatherman/Youngster/Boy/Blaine Murphy/Generic Anime Angsty guy/Fenrir/Loki/Kane/Vegeta/Belome/The Monster/Unknown Individual/Mu'Tazz/Trent Johannsen/Oliver Queen AKA The Green Arrow/Yacker/Creepy Telephone Voice/Espio/Nightwing/Grand Elder/Marty Aaron/GUN Commander/The Insane Man/Abomination/Ghoma/Scracth/More to come!
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sasuya View Post
    Yeah, I wouldn't really know either =0 I can't really speak Japanese and I think my accent and pronunciation was off ^^; I'm not really sure if I said some of the words right either XD
    Your pronunciation was better than mine! xD

    Maybe I should translate the lyrics for people?
     

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    I have some very good news...

    Nothing is written in stone yet, but I spoke with my friend Josh last week and it's possible that this radioplay may be turned into a full length flash animation. Unfortunately, I can't tell you when it will be released because I honestly don't know (there's a lot of animation to be done). But once it is completed, it will be glorious! >D

    With that said, we need an artist who is willing to come up with some quick character designs (I would do it myself, but I'm a little rusty; I would tell Josh to do it, but he's the key animator, so, yeeeeeeah). I will give you a brief description of each character so you won't be starting from scratch (or you might have your own vision which is always a plus). There is going to be a certain style to the animation so whatever you create will be tweaked.

    Keep in mind, no one is getting paid for their work (that includes me, Mo, Josh, Sasuya, Dymatrex, everyone), everything is voluntary! But the end results are definitely worth it and can even be put down on a resume. If you are interested send me an email (classifiednerd@gmail.com) with some examples of your previous work and I'll get back to you.

    To my cast members:

    Uh... So what do you think? xD And if you'd like to redo any lines, you know where to send them! I know I'm redoing a few. Everything is going to be remastered.
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