Shugo Chara episode 26 short fandub~

[xdragonsgirl28x]

Ok... Rosa here with a clip dubbed by TheNationMaker, Tyler, and myself ^^ Sorry, I'm really bad with Amu, but I think Tyler did amazing! ^^ Please leave a critique, or comment?

[ame="http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=NFMJVu5CCSU"]YouTube - Shugo Chara clip- FANDUB[/ame]

[xSPADEofHEART]

I love this scene.

Ikuto - I heard a lot of background noise in your lines. You also sounded a bit too deep for Ikuto, but that's just my opinion. You should sound more playful and in pain. Also, you sounded a bit nasely throughout the clip, but I'm not really sure if it was that or your accent (if you do have on.o_O). Just lighten up a bit more and I think you'll improve a lot!

Amu - I liked the voice you used for Amu! It was cute and fitting for her! You should have been more concerned in the beginning as you seemed to be faking kindness and concern. And when Ikuto's head was on Amu's lap she should have been more embarrassed.

Mixing - Using the voices from the original clip wasn't such a good move in this case. The bgm cut off suddenly and entered pretty suddenly as well. Lip flaps were sometimes off, but was done better than the sfx and bgm. Mixing quite a few sfx like footsteps, sparkles, etc.

A really cute clip and I enjoyed watching it!=3 It was a totally D'AAAAAAAAAAAAW inducing part.<3

[Nuko]

Amu: Your performance pretty nice, your voice had a childish tone of a 10 year old [which is good] Some of your emotion was a bit off @3@ Alot of your lines lacked energy.. Also in the "Not cool, finding you in a place like this" You needed to sound a bit worried"

Ikuto: You had alot of one liners ... like "Pain" and "lied" Maybe the script writier could have made a better choice of word's like "That hurt" or "I lied" [But I have to admit, I found the one worders a bit amusing]. Also I found your voice a bit gruff and low for Ikuto and like SpadeofHeart said you also needed to sound a bit more playful~

Mixing: Hmm It need more SFX and the music was a bit loud.. but everything else seemed in place.

Great job guys! Keep trying~!

[Ayu]

Ikuto: Good! B-But maybe you sounded a bit to mature for a teenaged boy! But I liked your emotion at needed times! *-* Very awesome~ Uguu!

Amu: I-I liked how you didn't try to make your voice all like so 'cute' type for Amu~ Because I think Amu's voice is more on the maturish/medium type. ^-^~ I-I noticed that you didn't scream the "OH BAKAAA" part. Why is that? (J-Just wondering..)

Overall: It was really cute! But it seems you only did this as a quick little fandub because you were bored? N-Not to be mean -- Of course.. ;-; But next time you make a fandub.. maybe you could.. hmm.. find others to voice the Charas? Or have fun voicing them yourselfs! ^^ G-Great fandub~ I love it! *-* Can't wait to see if you make a next one uguu~

4.5/5! S-Sorry!!

[xdragonsgirl28x]

Ikuto: Good! B-But maybe you sounded a bit to mature for a teenaged boy! But I liked your emotion at needed times! *-* Very awesome~ Uguu!

Amu: I-I liked how you didn't try to make your voice all like so 'cute' type for Amu~ Because I think Amu's voice is more on the maturish/medium type. ^-^~ I-I noticed that you didn't scream the "OH BAKAAA" part. Why is that? (J-Just wondering..)

Overall: It was really cute! But it seems you only did this as a quick little fandub because you were bored? N-Not to be mean -- Of course.. ;-; But next time you make a fandub.. maybe you could.. hmm.. find others to voice the Charas? Or have fun voicing them yourselfs! ^^ G-Great fandub~ I love it! *-* Can't wait to see if you make a next one uguu~

4.5/5! S-Sorry!!

thankyou very much for your critiques an comment!~ yah, i was bored so i asked TheNationMaker to do this with me ^^' ohh the bakaa part, i tried and tried, but it just didnt work with me. XD and my parents were beginning to think im crazy XD but i noticed i couldnt get onto your userpage... i wonder why... 0_o