AIR ~ Tori no Uta English Fandub

[Moonlightspiral]

I do love this song and I just thought I'd write some English lyrics for it XD
Though I am hopeless at singing my own lyrics ^^

Low notes hate me XD

Song: Tori no Uta
Anime: Air Tv

Critique or enjoy =D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qI_7HysWE_Q

[Jefferz]

I thought it was pretty good. The lyrics worked out well and your sining was good too. Like you said, some of the low notes got a bit flat, but other than that it was great.

[hakinechan]

I reailly liked your lyrics!
Like you said, you couldn't reach the low notes that well, and some notes were flat. The only high note that stood out and seemed off was the "wind" in "and cut through the wind~". I think your overlaying voice would be better as harmonies? But harmonies are hard... ;u;
Overall, xD I liked it! <3

[Moonlightspiral]

I reailly liked your lyrics!
Like you said, you couldn't reach the low notes that well, and some notes were flat. The only high note that stood out and seemed off was the "wind" in "and cut through the wind~". I think your overlaying voice would be better as harmonies? But harmonies are hard... ;u;
Overall, xD I liked it! <3

Yep i agree, I originally wanted to do harmonies ^^ but unfortunately after mass failing I just gave up XD
Yep the through the wind part is off (Dying of thirst perhaps...)
Thanks for the critique! ^^