Honey Bee(voice over)Critiques wanted

[ericJmonkey]

Hello everyone, I wanted to test my voice in an commercail advertisment.So I've decied to do a voice dub of the honey Bee, from the honey nut Cheerios commercail, so, I'd like to know what you guy's think of, did it suit it? was it advertising? I'd really like some feed back. Thanks


I did all the voices, and the mixing.




Link> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFeLATwPItw

[ericJmonkey]

critiques please^^

[Shift]

Did you voice all the characters? I have to say, I'm liking your range; the hero bee was pretty good, and the one in glasses was interesting, as well. The guy in the boat, though, was almost impossible to hear, his volume was way too low, and I wouldn've expected to hear something from him as his ship was launched away.

As for the mixing, the song worked pretty well, though it was a bit low. However, the sound effect you used for the swirling honey didn't fit the scene at all. And the random car vroom at the end, what was with that? The other SFX were also way too low in volume, like the waves and the propellors.

All in all, you need to keep working at it, but not a bad effort.

[ericJmonkey]

Thanks, I'll do my best,Yeah I did all the voices. Thanks for your support.


edit: I sorta tried to make it sound like an ocean full of honey,^^Thanks for your support though.

[Shift]

No problem. By the way, I sent you a private message. If you'd like, reply to it.