[KAP] Lemon Angel Project clip 1 "The Piano"

[Kitty]

Woww. I really haven't produced anything in way over a year. So, I'm probably a bit rusty. Anyways, this is the first clip that we (Amree and I) are producing from the series Lemon Angel Project~


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Cast (iooa)
Tomo: Amree Takahara
Miki: mippa

Mixing/Scripting
Kitty

SFX
My collection and original clip

Music
Lemon Angel OST
Beethoven's "The Tempest"

Thank you~! Please enjoy!

[YingFaStar]

Tomo: Amree Takahara -
WOW. That must've taken a lot of time to do Tomo's rambling XD... There were some parts I thought you came off too strongly emotion-wise. Like the "GYAH!" could've sounded more shocked and nervous rather than scared.
"I guess that should be obvious since she was like my older sister" came off sort of sassy to me; or like a "Well, DUH..." feeling. Instead of kinda, "Well, she was like my older sister, heh..." proud and happy.
Otherwise, I really liked your performance in here! I'm not really familiar with this series, but you portray Tomo really well.

Miki: mippa -
You only had a few lines at the end, but I liked them! It's hard to say too much from so little, though. Your first line "You are awfully noisy" had a bit of an attitude to it. To me, that line had more of an annoyed feel to it. Your lower register surprised me!

Mixing -
The piano was a little too loud at times. At Amree's softer lines, it was hard to hear what she was saying. The mouthflaps were a little off, but it was more that the VA's timing was off.
I liked how you paid attention to each detail - like the small echo added when they were talking in the piano room. Even though it was short, the mixing was nice!

[Zangya]

Mm. This was tastey. I enjoyed every bit of it. :3

[BWoods]

Wow...wow...I'm really glad I get to be part of this fandub. Everything about this clip was pure excellence.

Amree - For some reason it felt so natural to hear you kind of scatterbrained (maybe since the conversations we've had on Skype are much the same xD) I'm beyond impressed with your performance. The only thing I would say as a critique is that you made Tomo seem more like a bubbly and air headed rather than shy and intimidated. You know what though, I prefer your voice to the original audio anyway.

Mippa - For the few lines you had they were, as expected, well done. As YingFaStar pointed out the first line had a little too much sass to it, whereas in the clip Riki really came off as brutally honest and to-the-point. Almost like talking to a brick wall. But again, much like Amree's, you managed to bring the character to life. So that's more important to me in the end.

Mixing - Everything sounded clear and matched pretty well. There was a little bit of mouth flap missing, and the piano seemed a bit loud. Still, there was nothing here that ruined the clip. Very nice work here as well.

[mippa]

I totally agree with what you guys said about my first line...Hmm...I could've sworn I did a take or two that were more sedate for that first line--maybe it was a directorial decision, or they didn't match lip sync?

Amree, as you know, I adore your voice, and you really did a great job bringing your character to life! Everything that's been said has already been said--I can't wait to see more!

[Kitty]

I totally agree with everyone's critique so far. ^-^ The piano was a bit too loud, and the timing on Amree's rambling nearly killed us both. It was a pain in the butt to try and figure out. XD;;

But thank you for everyone's critique so far!

[AmreeTakahara]

Yay ^-^ It came out. Man it was so hard on that rambling @__@ *dies* It took me forever to say it right. It was especially hard to say the line because I was rushing a little bit, so I kind of just let my voice do what it wanted to for most of it. Tomo's voice in the original is very how do you say....can get annoying after listening to it too much, but still Tomo <33.

My voice is naturally high, so I didn't feel like I got the right tone for her, but I kind of gave up on that and just went with the emotion (which might explain why I went a little over the top sometimes).

Mippa: Kyaa! I really liked the tone you used for her! I don’t know why but I could just see Miki the moment you open your mouth for the line and I was like O.o...no way.. XD I liked your performance a lot. ^-^

Mixing: I know you like your Piano Kitty XD! It was a little loud is a few spots, but it might just be because I know what I'm saying, but I understood what I said in the clips.

Overall I had a fun, but....difficult time XD But I'm excited for the next clip! WOO! Thank you for your critiques. I appreciate them all. ^-^

[Lina820]

I really liked how this turned out!

Amree: I can only imagine how hard that rambling must have been. Your voice for Tomo fits prefectly!

Mippa: The voice and tone you used is prefect for Miki!

Mixing: I'd have to agree at time the piano was on the loud side, other than that great job!

I can't wait to see more of this!

[Cristina]

Amree's voice sounded so pure and sweet! I love when you play these kinds of characters! This might be mixing, but there was a part where Miki made a facial reaction in response to hearing Yui's name before Amree even said it~ Mippa's voice is very suited for Miki, I just think that instead of exasperated, you should maybe sound more like you're just brushing her off and like you don't really give a damn about her. She's just a pesky fly to you, easy to get rid of~ That's my opinion anyway Let's hear some more!

[Hane Moon]

Amree....that rambling was adorable. XD How many times did you have to record that without slipping up? Haha!

Mippa....I hope you never get angry at me. .__. I actually shrunk back in my seat a little bit. Felt kinda ashamed of myself for some reason. ^_^;