Arahime's summer 2008 ~ D E M O ~ R E E L!...critique?

[Arahime]

Arahime Demo Reel ~ 2
Time: 1.10
Voice: Arahime Otomi

http://media.putfile.com/Arahimes--D-e-m-o--R-e-e-l

Voices:
Sakura ~ Card Captors
Noelle ~ Tales of the Aybss
Ruby ~ Vampire + Rosario
Liana ~ Our World
Garnet ~ Final Fantasy ix
Touma ~ Minami-ke
Rikku ~ Final Fantasy x
original child character
Mami ~ Sister Princess
Ovelia ~ Final Fantasy Tactis
Tifa ~ Final Fantasy vii
Ruby ~ Vampire + Rosario
Noelle ~ Tales of the Abyss
Himeno ~ Pretear

lol ALOT of characters but I thought I may aswell get as many in as possible. These are all from auditions and lines I've done in the past 2 months.

I would really love some critique / feedback?

Thanks for listening!

[Arahime]

Critique? Anyone? *Needs to work on patience* lol xD

[LG65]

Critique? Anyone? *Needs to work on patience* lol xD

(as a sensei) You are definitely getting it, 'grasshopper'

(Normally) Anyhoo... I took a listen. I am rather amazed that you pulled off a wide variety of emotions and ranges. I am really impressed. Well done!

I didn't find too many issues that may have nicked me, so... excellent work!

[Arahime]

Thanks xD

[Arahime]

*Sigh* anyone else? I really want to know how I can improve....lol xD

[Sayaka]

You have a nice voice, Arahime. ^^ And there's definitely a good range of emotion presented in your demo.

One problem I hear is that a lot of your lines seem too short, leaving little time for the listener to get a grasp of the character. And the sound quality among some of the clips differ, but I know you've used some auditions with actual recordings from the productions you are in.

Other than that, it's great! Keep up the great work!

[snowfender]

you have a great range of voices. it feels like you were a little bit restrained in emotions. a good example is the last character. you're amazed! don't be afraid to push that out. some of the lines you had spots where you sounded unnatural as well, so just watch out for just reading the lines.

i love your voice. it's so sweet! you really do have a great range, just don't be afraid to express. good luck =D

[Mellyface]

You have a cute voice!
Very good for a young/teenage heroine :]
I really like your range of emotions and different characters
it was varied but all still uniquely you
great reel! :]

[Arahime]

Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll keep in mind to say longer lines in my next demo reel and express more emotion in general

[princeroy]

I really don't get how all the females on this site are so AWESOME!!! >.< GREAT JOB!!! ;.; Makin' me all jealous, lol.