Edited version of First Demo and Second Demo

[Dark Hawk]

New Version of the First Demo, Put in a few changes due to the fact I found some tools on Goldwave (Echo and Reverb and a better idea on how to use volume) Had to redo all the lines though but they should be hearable now and have more appropiate BGM for each line. Some changes to a few lines where made again, which combined with everything else is more or less why I put a new thread up

http://media.putfile.com/Demo-37-22

Characters (In order of appearence)

Mighty (Bomberman Jetterz)
Sai (Naruto)
Dr. Tomeo (Sailormoon)
Kefka (FFVI)
Xavier (Own Creation)
Zane (Own Creation)
Trinity (Boktai)

Music (in order of song)
Okkesenman (one of the many version)
Max's theme (Bomberman Jetterz)
Hige-Hige Bandits theme (Bomberman Jetterz)
Dancing Mad (FFVI Black Mages version)
Memories of Ballons (Bomberman Jetterz)
Mighty's and Shirobomb's Theme (Bomberman Jetterz)

Edit:

UPDATE!

Second demo reel

http://media.putfile.com/Demoreel2-42

Characters

Dominic - Eureka 7
Some Random Guy that likes to laugh
Hippo - MMPP In a nutshell line
Death Sycthe - Soul Eater
Shinigami - Soul eater
Some guy from something called Red Dwarf.

Note: I know there's a some puffs and stuff in there with the laugh but thats one of the old old old one and I wanted to keep it in there to see if I got nay better >.>

[Shintarou Inuzuka]

You have a very nice range ^_^ I liked it. Just a few tips:

- Keep the musical interludes to an absolute minimum; in a few clips, it took like 2-3 seconds after the music started that we heard your voice. Your voice is the most important part, and most directors will only really pay attention to the first 15 seconds or so, so padding it with music will REALLY hurt you. I'd say the start of the music and the start of the line should be no more than a split-second apart, and leave really just enough time in between that the producer will know it's a different voice (which he/she should be able to just by hearing it) and no more than that.
- Try to separate similar-sounding voices. You have enough voices that you can pull off not having two similar-sounding voices back-to-back. That was one of the problems with my first demo reel.
- Make sure to keep the energy and crispness in your voice even in "subdued" sort of voices -- and try to speak a bit clearer; in a couple of the clips, a few of the lines sounded, for lack of a better word, slurred a bit. This doesn't mean overact or to make it sound "riled-up" when your character's supposed to be calm; just make sure that the performance is still there and, above all, still clear.

Overall, great job ^_^

[Ayu]

I love your voice!!!! <3

[Dark Hawk]

Added a second Reel to it with Some Old/New Audition, two random things, and one line from something I was in.

Thanks for the advice, Shin! I think I did better with that in the second reel, the voice thing, and I think I'll stay away from the BGM music for a while.

Ayu thanks for the Compliment!

[MaNa Shuffle]

hmm...for the 2nd Demo.

I thought the lines sounded slurred and the more emotion ones sounded forced.

And there were puffs also.

You have a nice range though.Keep trying =D.

I hope the critques help.

3.8/5