New Demo? XD Geez... *Critique Please*

[Jasmine]

Nothing else to say.. Demo Reel? XD
Most of them are random original characters, bleh >>;

Putfile
Send Space

Constructive crits are really appreaciated! ^-^

Thank you <3

[scottoka1]

It was pretty good. Great job on it ^^

[andy ichigo]

Oh *0* Just lovely.
Your getting much better at masking your accent, I can tell. =D Emotion was well done too.

[Jasmine]

It was pretty good. Great job on it ^^

Thanks alot! ^^
<3

Oh *0* Just lovely.
Your getting much better at masking your accent, I can tell. =D Emotion was well done too.

You really think so? XD Thank youuu~~

[sparf]

Hey, I enjoyed this! I dont' know what sort of accent you were masking, but whatever it was, I couldnt' tell it. So...good job!

Now for some critiques:

First thing I notice is that the music seems to be a little overpowering in a majority of cases.

Second is that there is some measure of "dead air" between the lines. It tends to drag the whole demo down a bit.

the reads on "There is nothing you can do to save them" and "Who do they think they are. " seemed a little flat, like you could have put much more vocal variety and energy into them. THe first felt like a Sniper Wolf type of character, so I'd go with a more seductive tone for that one. As for the latter, it seemed like it was intended to be some sort of robot. So the flatness would make sense, except for the way the line is written. The character is obviously not without emotion. "Hmmph. Attack them." would indicate arrogance or disdain, neither of which I picked up in your reads.


Hope this is some help!

[Data Drain]

I want to listen, but putfile hates my soul and doesn't ever work. D= Any chance you could e-mail it to me? =D

[Jasmine]

I want to listen, but putfile hates my soul and doesn't ever work. D= Any chance you could e-mail it to me? =D

I just put up a download link ^_^

Second is that there is some measure of "dead air" between the lines. It tends to drag the whole demo down a bit.

D: I don't get what you mean. ><

As for the latter, it seemed like it was intended to be some sort of robot. So the flatness would make sense, except for the way the line is written. The character is obviously not without emotion. "Hmmph. Attack them." would indicate arrogance or disdain, neither of which I picked up in your reads.

Yea, that character is supposed to be arrogant and evil (kinda XD).
Monotone characters are my specialities X3

Thank you SO MUCH for this critique! I will try to put more emotions in my voice next time and calm the music down abit o.o

Thanks alot!

[sparf]

D: I don't get what you mean. ><

THere's a lag between the end of one line and the beginning of another. All that there is in those segments are music.

Flowing Properly a demo leaves you wanting more of the last voice even as you're hearing the new one. check out the house demos at http://www.voicebank.net for examples.

Glad I was of some help!

[Jasmine]

THere's a lag between the end of one line and the beginning of another. All that there is in those segments are music.

Flowing Properly a demo leaves you wanting more of the last voice even as you're hearing the new one. check out the house demos at http://www.voicebank.net for examples.

Glad I was of some help!

Aah!~ I see!~
Thank you! ^_^ I really appreciate this!

[AspiringVoiceActor]

Awesome im new to voice acting and can't help thinking my British Accent is getting in the way... Unless of course someone is looking for someone who can do a british accent -.-