Ok, so this is just a small part of a huge story that I'm thinking of writing. So this is NOT the beginning of the story but it's still from the beginning part of it.
I wrote this small part as an english task in school and I thought that I'd make it a radioplay or something but i needed some opinions on it ^^;;
My english is not amazing but I DID try my best! Please read and enjoy!
[] - Narrator talking
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“So today is the day…”
“yea..” Whispered two boys to each other.
Kai, the young short teacher was stood in front of the class, back turned to the pupils and writing his lesson plan on the board.
[It was noisy in class 11D. it always is. 11D is the rudest class in All Star High School. Many teachers have tried teaching 11D but they all miserably failed.
Now Kai, is their new teacher. A 17 year old genius with a Maths university degree.
You would think of him like any other teacher but…]
“OK! I’ve had enough!” Shouted Kai.
There was some silence.
Everyone turned their eyes to him.
“I’m hungry! Lesson is over.”
[…he was different.]
Now, there was complete silence
Jaws dropped – the class was just speechless.
In complete silence, Kai walked to his desk and opened his black Reebok bag. He reached inside the bag and took out a packet of McCoys crisps – Mexican Chilli Flavour.
The class starred at him as he opened the packet of crisps and took the first bit.
As Kai took the second bite, he stopped and looked around the class room.
He just realised that all eyes were gazing at him.
“What?” he asked puzzled with his mouth full.
Kayleigh, along haired blond girl spoke and broke the silence.
“So you’re just going to sit there and eat?” she asked.
“What? So you want me to sit there and starve to death?”
He continued “plus, there is no point in teaching…” He started talking slowly “…an idiotic…”
[1]
The words echoed in Jack’s head.
“…arrogant…”
[2]
… then the next one…
“…and a stupid class who doesn’t even want to learn? Ne?” said Kai bitterly with a cute smile on his face. ^_^
[3]
Everyone suddenly stood up on their feet drawing and swinging what they have of weapons.
“Oi!” They all shouted at once, looking at Kai with glary, angry eyes.
“Hmm..?” Kai looked around the room.
Wooden Swords
Metal poles.
Steel chains.
Baseballs, Basketballs and footballs.
“So that’s why no one has been able to teach this good for nothing class…” ^_^
Jack barged to the front angrily and stood right in front of Kai with his tall 6ft 2 body.
He looked down at Kai, stretched his long arm and held Kai from his Jacket neck collar.
Everyone watched as their leader – Jack handled the situation.
“Just who do you think you are??” Asked Jack with an aggressive tune.
Kai looked up and starred at Jack right in the eyes, but now with a serious look on his face.
He answered him calmly “I am your teacher”.
Jack looked pissed off.
They starred even more.
“Now go back and sit down on your seat.” Said kai.
“Oh?.. and where are your manners, teacher?” Asked Kayleigh with a sarcastic tune. “aren’t you supposed to say ‘Please’?”
“Heh.. yea.. where are your manners Mr. teacher?” said Jack with a smirk on his face.
Kai smiled. ^v^
“Well, to tell you the truth Jack, the word please is only said when someone asks another for a favour…”
He stopped for a second.
“But…”
He looked at Jack face to face.
“I’m not asking you… I’m ordering you.”
Jack became furious.
“WHY YOU?!”
He tightened his hand grip on Kai’s collar.
He pulled his arm backwards and as he was going to push Kai on the ground a voice called.
“JACK! ENOUGH!”
Everyone turned to the opened classroom door to find Mr Donald, or otherwise known as Zack – a young handsome man who’s in his twenties – a Geography teacher.
Jack stopped and let go of Kai.
Kai was thrown back by the force so he lost his balance and dropped on the floor on his backside.
“Hmph!” said Jack and walked past Mr. Donald and out of the classroom without saying anything.
The others packed their things and followed Jack.
Kai, who was still on the floor, sighed.
He smiled.
“So I’ll see you guys tomorrow then! Have a nice day!”
Zack looked at him puzzled then gave a sweet smile.
He moved towards Kai and helped him to get back on his feet.
“Hehe, thanks.” Said Kai smiling.
“Are you out of your mind? Getting into a fight with a dangerous gang leader isn’t the best move for a teacher who’s just starting out.”
“Hehe, that was fun!” said Kai smiling.
“you know what? For an extraordinary weird person, you’re really interesting.” Said Zack nicely.
“Never mind me. This class is what’s interesting!...” He continued “…this year is going to be so much fun!”
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So, what do you think? ^^;;
