SELECT? (English)

[Hatomikazuki]

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-LaSBi0W-I

As I'm listening to it again there are some clicks I didn't notice before...;~;'' Well anyway, I worked hard on this, so I'd love any critique anyone has to offer. =3

English Vocals: Hatomikazuki
English Lyrics: Hatomikazuki

The harmonies were hard...and the spoken stuff at the beginning iand the end sound like ick. >__>''

Enjoy~ =3

[jintor]

Your voice is too low for Yukkiiiiii... good job with the harmonies though. I think the voice track is too loud for the music though, you might need to mix it better.

[Nuko]

Jintor It isnt the point of the voice of the character when it comes to singing >>

I will listen when my internet gets back properly and Critique ^^~

[GInsenshi]

its doesn't load for me, NOO I wanna listen!

[heaveninlove]

it sounded that you really tried hard for this song..
points on your effort..
Im not fond of this song...so i can't really give a proper critique [SORRY ABOUT THAT XD]

but you have improved and your voice are somewhat softer now

[Cake Batter]

This is pretty good. I especially like the harmonies.

Critique: I can't really hear the lyrics well; Try to enunciate them more, because from what I can hear, they're good~ I think the tone you used for this song is a little too harsh for the song—perhaps a softer tone would have complimented the song better. As for the speaking parts, since you were singing in English, maybe you should have tried to say the parts sans a Japanese accent.

I could really tell you put a lot of effort in it. Good job~ :3

[andy ichigo]

You need to pronounce the words a little more cleary, but other than that I really liked it.