Kannazuki no Miko [.Fandub Clip.]

[Miharu Yuki]

Spoilers if you haven't seen the series, or the final episode.

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A little something I whipped up. I had been meaning to do a fandub of this scene for a while now, I just haven't had the time to do it. I used the dialog from the english dub, if anyone was wondering. And, I know, my voice may not suit Chikane. But ah well, I tried right? More emotion..I know..I tried, really I did.

Anyways;;

Himeko Was Voiced By; MiharuYuki
Chikane Was Voiced By; MiharuYuki

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Used in fandub;

Sound effects: Ripped from original.
BGM: Garasu no Hana from the Kannazuki no Miko OST.
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Fandub clip can be found here ~> http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=wV97Q6FotwQ

[topleka]

Hm...well you already know you need more emotion, but I'll leave a critique anyway. That's okay, right? ^_^;;

If you want more emotion to come, you should think about what words you want an emphasis on. For instance, in the line "I've always loved you," you seemed to put just a little bit more emphasis on "always" when in this case it might sound better if you emphasize "loved."

Also, you seemed to string all your words together. I noticed there weren't really any breaks between sentences, when you really should pause to get the point across. For instance, between "...a different kind of love than yours is," and "you were my first love," the way you finish the first sentence and start the second make it seem more like it was supposed to be one whole sentence. Use pauses, and start the next sentence anew instead of trailing from one to the next. I know that the character has a certain voice type, but don't be afraid to use more range and go higher or lower to show your emotions.

The timing and lip flaps were very nicely done; I was quite impressed. You also have a beautiful voice that I wouldn't mind hearing more of. ^-^ Also, your gasp as Himeko was pretty cute. owo I look forward to hearing more of you in the future.