Otome Wa Boku Ni Koishiteru fandub clip 1

[Randommirokulover]

I'm so super excited. I have completely finished the first clip out of many for this series. I couldn't have done it without my oh so awesome cast which sent in there lines on time and very fast and good quality. I'm sure they would all appreciate critiques. Many more clips are on the way.

People in this clip
Mizuho: Trainer Kelly
Mariya: Belladonna Gardenia
Takako: Reno_7Turk1
Kimie: Randommirokulover
Kana: ElzaHZT
Yukari: Scarlotte
Extra girl 1: Merchant
Extra girl 2: Lovergirlinuyasha

The poor mixing, script, and everything else done by: Randommirokulover

Song in the background is from: Ouran High School Host Club OST

A link to the clip is here on Youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXcfcChYzVA

[Reno_7Turk1]

Everyone who was on this fandub with me was absolutely wonderful! there were some sound issues as well as lip syncing but that comes with time and practice. I do like the voice for Mariya and Mizuho, very fitting to the character. Kana is so adorable and I think she did the best of us all lol. The extra girls though didn't seem they were too interested in the project.

[LittleStar]

*clapclap*
I think it was pretty good overall! Some of the mixing was a bit off, but other than that it was good.
I think Takako could have sounded a little more snobbish, but her voice fit well. Kana was so adorable! xD The extra girls could have sounded more interested, and more emotion was needed. I really liked Mariya's voice; it sounded strong-willed and all. Kimie lacked some emotion, too. Kelly did a good job on Mizuho's voice, it didn't sound too feminine, and it was just right. Yukari didn't really have lots of lines, but from what I gathered, it was good.
Sorry for the terrible critique ;_;
Anyway, I really enjoyed the clip~ Good job, Mirokulover! =D

[trainer_kelly]

I do like the voice for Mariya and Mizuho, very fitting to the character.

x3 Glad you liked my voice for Mizuho! It means a lot. ^^

Kelly did a good job on Mizuho's voice, it didn't sound too feminine, and it was just right.

Thank you! ^^ Glad you think so. =3
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Mizuho: o_o It was me. XD; I need to work on saying "Takako-san". It was hard for me to say for some odd reason.

Mariya: It was good. I just think the first line you said needed to be more...shouting/angry-ish. It sounded a bit...flat to me.

Takako: It was good. =3 The only bad thing was your mircophone. But there's nothing you can do about that.

Kimie: I liked it a lot, to tell you the truth. =3 I thought your voice fit.

Kana: Very cute! You fit Kana. ^^

Yukari: I can't really say much, because you only had one line...which was blended in with all of us.

Extra girl 1: You needed to sound more like you agreeing/confirming that you were going to listen to what they were telling you to do.

Extra girl 2: Same as Extra girl 1; You needed to sound more like you agreeing/confirming that you were going to listen to what they were telling you to do.

[Katsu Koneko]

Yay Otome wa Boku ni Koishiteru fandub.

It was pretty good overall, my only nitpick ish the sound issues, but that's it. Great job everyone. -is shot-

[Randommirokulover]

Yes, I know I was the one who picked the cast... I still want to give everyone I critique though including myself.

Mizuho: Sounds just like I imagine an American Mizuho to sound like.
Mariya: Pretty good, but most of the lines should have sounded a little angier since you were indeed in an arguement.
Takako: Just a tad snobbier would have been great, but overall wonderful.
Kimie: should have sounded a little more demanding
Kana: ADORABLE!
Yukari: The one line was very good.
Extra girl 1: sounded pretty much bored
Extra girl 2: I feel didn't take it very serious like it should have been.
Mixing: Def. needs to be worked on and I'm trying to improve on that. Hopefully I'll do better on the next clip.

[Kai-chan]

Mizuho: Trainer Kelly: Sounds a bit too girly to really be a boy.
Mariya: Belladonna Gardenia: One of my favorite voices here, I think it's nice and femine, but very tough as well, and great energy. Though, there is a extra touch of..Mariya-ness missing that I can't describe in words, unfortunatly. |D
Takako: Reno_7Turk1: Microphone quality is poor, and the voice needs to be more feminine, but you got the attitude down.
Kimie: Randommirokulover: Should be a little deeper and huskier
Kana: ElzaHZT: Really cute, but needs to be smoother and maybe even a little higher.
Yukari: Scarlotte: Can't really say based on one line.
Extra girl 1: Merchant: Sounded kinda manly, and the emotion doesn't fit her facial expression.
Extra girl 2: Lovergirlinuyasha: Sounds..really perky XD
Mixing: Apologies, I tottally forgot to send the OST |D Lip flaps seemed to match well, and volume was about the same for everyone's lines, although Kimie sounded a bit quieter than the rest. Probably youtube's mistake (Which is why a download link should be offered), but the last line was cut off.


Sorry if my critique is a little rough, but hey, I've been a fan of this series since the day it came out last october~(in the form of anime that is, not as the original dating-sim hentai. D: )

[trainer_kelly]

Mizuho: Trainer Kelly: Sounds a bit too girly to really be a boy.


Sorry if my critique is a little rough, but hey, I've been a fan of this series since the day it came out last october~(in the form of anime that is, not as the original dating-sim hentai. D: )

It's fine if your critique is rough. XD; If I was to critque some Pokémon fandubs, I'd probably end up writing a paragraph or two. o_o;

I have to agree that my voice is too girly to really be a boy. Though...did Mizuho's voice inside the anime sound really sound like a guy? I think his voice along with the rest of his appearence were very much like girl, making it very easy to forget his realy gender. Buuuut...that's just me. I'm not offended or anything (because I do agree with what you said), I'm just saying...

[Reno_7Turk1]

Takako: Reno_7Turk1: Microphone quality is poor, and the voice needs to be more feminine, but you got the attitude down.

i understand that i dont have the best microphone in the world but i think my mic sounded the best... i know it had some echo in it but thats it... no background noises were in the clip and it was clean. More feminine... eh... i can agree with that but i didnt want to give her a girly girl voice... im not like that... im more of a deeper voiced kind of woman and thats how i saw Takako

[Randommirokulover]

*clapclap*
I think it was pretty good overall! Some of the mixing was a bit off, but other than that it was good.
I think Takako could have sounded a little more snobbish, but her voice fit well. Kana was so adorable! xD The extra girls could have sounded more interested, and more emotion was needed. I really liked Mariya's voice; it sounded strong-willed and all. Kimie lacked some emotion, too. Kelly did a good job on Mizuho's voice, it didn't sound too feminine, and it was just right. Yukari didn't really have lots of lines, but from what I gathered, it was good.
Sorry for the terrible critique ;_;
Anyway, I really enjoyed the clip~ Good job, Mirokulover! =D

Yeah... I really just can't seem to get emotion into my lines. I don't understand it either. At school and home I'm known as such a drama queen who over does stuff (kind of like a toned down version of Tamaki in a way says my friend tori...) I'm really glad you enjoyed the clip though. Hope you will watch the second one too when it's done.