Spiral Episode 5 Clip

[RubedoKukai]

Ah! It's finally here! Sorry it took so long to make everyone...but I finally finished! My first try at mixing so critique nicely please!

See it here! (Stream)

A big thanks to all the cast who made this possible!

Castlist
Ayumu Narumi: RubedoKukai
Hiyono Yuizaki: Rockie
Eyes Rutherford: Sukisho
Kousuke Asazuki: lionfayt
Rio Takuechi: Rosette
Mr. Imazato: P3RFECT
Ms. Suzuki: Draco--Skully
Extras: Adidaas, thatkid22, RubedoKukai, lionfayt, Edobean

Music
Spiral OST

SFX
SoundDogs
Original
Ripped from Original

[Mochan]

*gasp* I want to watch this so bad! But my internet is being soooooooooo slow. I will try to watch tonight and give an actual critique.

[lionfayt]

AWESOME ITS OUT!

I'll put up a critique once i've finished watching it

[Rockie]

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

yayayayay!!! It's finished! Oh my gosh that was totally awsome! Ok on to reviews now...

Ayumu Narumi: RubedoKukai: You were really great! Your lines had a lot of emotion, and personality in them. I thought you played Ayumu wonderfully. There were a couple of lines that I thought could use a bit more you know...pazazz I guess, but overall I really liked your preformance.

Hiyono Yuizaki: Rockie: omgz leik u ttuly suxs >P
ha, I think I did ok. There were some lines that I wish I had done over now like the creepy one and the laughing, and the info on kousuke. He's 14 and in elementary school? What? lol. Also some of the lines didn't fit the flaps for her, but I think that was my fult e-e

Eyes Rutherford: Sukisho: oooh that was awsome @-@ Your the voice you used for Eyes was just so...I dunno...I don't wanna say hot, but >.> It was a very cool voice. And your delevery was also very very well done~ No complaints really

Kousuke Asazuki: lionfayt: I thought you did very well in this clip! You had emotion in your lines. There were a couple I thought could have been better, but overall you were very good.


Rio Takuechi: Rosette: awwww, you were so kyoot!!! >3< You defenetly put a lot of personality into Rio. You captured her shy personality perfectly! No complaints at all : D

Mr. Imazato: P3RFECT: You did really great also! I can't really find any complaints.


THAT. WAS. AWSOME. *watches it again*

[lightofhope18]

Wow, that was really good. I thought the cast choices were great!

Ayumu/Rudebo - I've always thought you'd make a wonderful Ayumu and my prediction came true. I do wish you had made the pitch slightly lower and more mature sounding, but it still fit Ayumu well. My main concern is your mic - it has this weird mechanical weezying sound. I've noticed it when I edit your lines for Utawarerumono and especially in Le Chevalier D'Eon. Spiral was no exception either. That's the only point that really degrades your performance. My suggestion is checking up on your mic. This isn't a huge problem, but it might become worse later on...

Hiyono/Rockie - I really liked your interpetation of Hiyono's character - you kept a leveled high voice that wasn't super annoying. You weren't quite as spastic as I would have liked her to be, you were a more controlled version of Hiyono. It seemed like you were holding back your energy a bit. I did like how you said "Hiyono Punch". You had that down perfectly.

Eyes/Sukisho - Although Eyes is a pretty mature sounding character, I think he sounded too deep. A slightly lighter pitch would have been perfect for him. He also sounded a bit too monotoned for my liking, but that's me. I do think you had a pretty solid performance overall, though.

Kousuke/lionfayt - Like Sukisho, I think the pitch could have been different - in your case, lower. You made him sound slightly younger than he is, which changed his character type slightly. There was also a really weird echo in your lines. I'm not sure if Rubedo did that on purpose but I found it awkward sounding. You did well on the characterization and I'm noticing such improvement since D.N. Angel!

Rio/Rosette - It so nice to hear your voice again, Rosette. I've rather missed hearing you voice since its so pretty. You had a wonderful voice for Rio, my only issue was she sounded too mature - even though she is pretty mature, I think her voice could have sounded younger. Overall, you did well protraying her character.

Imazato/P3RFECT - I have to agree with Rockie, you had a great performance and I couldn't really find anything that irked me.

Suzaku/Draco--Skully - I think you did a nice job as her, although I wish she had been more dramatic with her lines, like she was overacting more than she should. I didn't really like how you made her straight and strict like, but your voice was fitting.

Mixing - I thought it was pretty good mixing. Some of the OSTs could have been rearranged in a different order. lionfayt's echo really bugged me as did Rubedo's mic sound and the volume differences. There was a huge difference between Rubedo's and P3RFECT. And there were a lot of mouth flaps. A lot. Other than that, it was pretty good. I like the cast choices.

[lionfayt]

Well, The echo in the scenes with me. i think Rubedo added them in. cuz both Eyes and Kosuke are in a huge room so sound bounces off the walls and stuff. and makes an echo. plus when i recorded them...they didnt have any echo.

but yeah, agreed with everyone else....this was awesome!. i also love the cast choices here.

Ayumu/Rubedo: Nice voice man and nice emotion too. (even though most of the time Ayumu just sounds laid back. cuz he's supposed to). yea, i think there is somethin' wrong with the quality of your mic here. like theres a metallic-y kinda sound to it, like LoH said. and also, you were kinda quiet with your lines at times...then louder at other times. overall here, you did rather well. awesome.

Hiyono/ Rockie: omg. wow, i loved your performance here, Rockie! you were probably my favorite outta this clip. you portrayed her emotion and personality well. with here crazy, zany-ness and your voice fit her really well. Great job!

Eyes/Sukisho: well, i can see why you got cast as Eyes in the past here. you have the accent and Eyes-personality down pretty well, but i also agree with LoH...you kinda did sound somewhat monotone at times. but still awesome. maybe raise your voice up just a tad in pitch and i think that'll be it.

Kosuke/Me: uhhh....well, i do agree that my voice for Kosuke, in this, is rather young sounding, i know. but i guess with the few lines i had. i did a decent job, just gotta remember...next time...make his voice more Teenaged sounding. (note to self....). also....if you guys have noticed, i missed some mouth flaps here and there, i think those were my fault, i had some trouble with saying some lines (oohh...i should've saved those bloopers) and i tried my best matching them.

Rio/Rosette: your voice was another voice i really liked in this clip. you made her sound like a little kid, kinda. which she's supposed to sound. and your emotions were well done...especially with the running away from Ayumu and when you met up with Mr. Imazato. (oooohhh, ssscaaarrryy). overall....awesome job.

Mr.Imazato/ P3RFECT: i thought your voice matched rather well with Imazato. agreeing with everyone else's comments on you, you did a great job on this character, nothin' really to comment on.

Ms.Suzuki/Draco--Skully: well, even if it is a short part, awesome short part it was. you also had a very nice performance here Draco, some lines could be improved, but overall. nice.

Extras/Adidaas, thatkid22, RubedoKukai, lionfayt, Edobean: well, i've got to say guys. I think we did AWESOME. WE WERE THE BEST!!. ahahaha. no, but seriously. Extras Rock! and everyone did do an awesome job as the extras.

Mixing: the only thing i really have to say is, sometimes the SFX's volume changed in the clip...like it was quieter then Louder and then just right amount of volume...the LOUD again. just watch out for that Rubedo. thats about it.

awesome fandub. glad i was apart of it. this probably was the only fandub wher emy acting didnt suck...or my voice wasnt THAT far away from the character. or i didnt sound reallly bad.

Overall, this was awesome to the MAX! (cant wait for the continuation ep).

[Ishtar]

Nice dub overall. I thought some of the mic qualities needed some work, but it wasn't too bad. Who was the last girl? The mysterious one?

[lightofhope18]

Nice dub overall. I thought some of the mic qualities needed some work, but it wasn't too bad. Who was the last girl? The mysterious one?

It was Rio.

[Rosette]

Glad to see this is out! Now for my critique...

Ayumu/RubedoKukai - I liked your performance a lot--it reminded me quite a bit of the dub's voice for him. The only thing I noticed was that your "So...I haven't done anything wrong" line sounded a bit rushed, like you had started off too slow and tried to speed it up at the end so that it fit the flaps. But still, you really captured the "indifferent" nature of Ayumu's personality. Great job!

Hiyono/Rockie - You really did a great job as Hiyono; I loved your energy, especially during your shouting parts. I have no complaints, really. I thought it was a really good performance.

Eyes/Sukisho - I thought you captured his personality well, but I have to agree with LoH and lionfayt that your voice was just a bit too deep for Eyes. I haven't seen the original version of the series (just the dub), so maybe he has a deeper voice in that? You still did a very nice job, though!

Kosuke/lionfayt - Your voice also reminded me a bit of the dub, but as LoH said, I think it could've been a tad lower. Your acting was good, though. The only other thing that stood out was that it seemed you had a few puffs on some of your lines, but that just might've been me XD But yeah, nice work!

Rio/Rosette - I totally screwed up with the flaps of that first line, so sorry about that >__<;; Also, I probably should've made her sound a bit younger, like LoH said.

Mr. Imazato/P3RFECT - You had a really solid performance, and I loved the voice you used for him! No complaints, really.

Ms. Suzuki/Draco--Skully - Very nice performance. My only real critique is that you could've been a bit more severe with Rio when you were explaining to Mr. Imazato what had happened to the window (I know she's cute and all, but still XDD). Overall, you had a really good voice for the character!

Extras - I loved you guys. Seriously. Especially the guys running at the end. Whoever did the lowest voice, kudos to you! I loved it!

Mixing - Not much to complain about. You did a really good job with this, RubedoKukai! The only thing that seemed a bit off to me SFX-wise, was the glass breaking when Ayumu was explaining about the elastic properties of glass. It sounded a bit cut-off.

Overall, this was a really good production, and I'm glad I was able to be a part of this! And yes, Ishtar, the freaky little girl at the end was me XDD

[Adidaas]

Awesome, it's finally out. The mixing was a tad off at times, but seriously who cares. Acting was solid, some people's voices changed all a sudden at times though(Ayumu, Ms. Suzuki).

It was still sweet in the end, great job everybody.

Extras/Adidaas, thatkid22, RubedoKukai, lionfayt, Edobean: well, i've got to say guys. I think we did AWESOME. WE WERE THE BEST!!. ahahaha. no, but seriously. Extras Rock! and everyone did do an awesome job as the extras.

Hellz yeah, extras rock. YEAH YEAH!!!