A detective story idea...

[Jing]

I have been trying to write a good story for some time now. I just started one with a SD (student detective) and it had been working out well.

Story:

It starts out with a 15 year-old boy named Yuki. His parents were both detectives, but have already passed away. He now lives with his older sister. He solves crimes with special tricks for a local detective agency. Being the only SD at school, he's always being disturbed.

Chapter 1 Info:

It starts out with a girl falling off a building. It starts this wehole story. Yuki's first case. But, for his first case, he somehow becomes a witness... and a suspect. When Mr. Sana (his teacher) and Miguel (his detective friend, 21 y/o) meet with him, Yuki explains the attemped murder and that the suspect used special tricks do it. This starts out the sting of cases in his city. He may become a famous detective someday.

It's like a mixture between Spiral and Detective Conan and my own ideas.
Hopefully you'll like. The first chapter should be up today or tommorow.

What do you guys think? Critique?

[Nicolas]

I had an idea for something along those lines also so I am naturally very exited about a serial detective RP. I would definatley like to see this happen. Its a good idea to have a lot of mysteries/twists/'cases' to hand though as its not always the easiest genre to pump out due to the fact that the stories have a higher complexity than the norm. But that goes without saying.

Anyway, yes!

[topleka]

Yay! I love Spiral and Detective Conan. ^.^ I would definitely be interested in a project like this.

[Shizuragirl]

Yay! Detective-ness! ^^ *twirls around* I'd be sooooo interested in this! ^^ *sometimes pretends she's a detective* hehe ^^;;;;;;;

[Chinomi]

Yay! I love Spiral and Detective Conan. ^.^ I would definitely be interested in a project like this.

Spiral *drools*