I have been trying to write a good story for some time now. I just started one with a SD (student detective) and it had been working out well.
It starts out with a 15 year-old boy named Yuki. His parents were both detectives, but have already passed away. He now lives with his older sister. He solves crimes with special tricks for a local detective agency. Being the only SD at school, he's always being disturbed.
Chapter 1 Info:
It starts out with a girl falling off a building. It starts this wehole story. Yuki's first case. But, for his first case, he somehow becomes a witness... and a suspect. When Mr. Sana (his teacher) and Miguel (his detective friend, 21 y/o) meet with him, Yuki explains the attemped murder and that the suspect used special tricks do it. This starts out the sting of cases in his city. He may become a famous detective someday.
It's like a mixture between Spiral and Detective Conan and my own ideas.
Hopefully you'll like. The first chapter should be up today or tommorow.
What do you guys think? Critique?