Full Moon Wo Sagashite - Chapitre 1

[Lycoris]

This is a French radioplay of the first chapter of the FMWS manga. This is my first production, so I know its far from perfect. Comments and critique would be very much appreciated =3.
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Yay!!!
J'ai ENFIN fini de mixer!! Ca m'a pris a peu pres... euh... vraiment, vraiment longtemps -_-;;. Mes parents arretait pas de me chialer apres parce que je passe trop de temps sur l'ordi maintenant. (mais c'est pas de ma faute, je voulait juste finir de mixer!!!).
Bon, comme c'est ma premiere production, je sais que c'est loin d'etre parfait. Il y a une partie qui ou le volume est un peu plus basse... vous allez savoir quand vous l'entendez, je crois. Les SFX sont aussi un peu bizairre des fois -_-;;. Je m'excuse, la prochaine fois je vais me patienter un peu plus quand je vais a la recherche des SFX (Je trouve que celui des entrees des Shinigami est vraiment... mal choisi...).

Mais enfin, je veux dire un grand MERCI a mon cast!! Vous avez tous tres bien joue vos roles!! Vraiment, bravo a tous. Il y a peut etre des MINISCULES erreurs de prononciation, mais OMG, c'est meme pas remarkable. Bravo a tous! Ceux que j'ai scouter, je ne sais pas si vous avez deja lu le manga ou vu l'anime de FMWS, mais OMGZ, votre performance c'etait geniale O.O ^^.

Without further ado, Lycoris Productions presents:
http://media.putfile.com/FMWS-Chapitre-1-
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Cast (in order of appearance):
Mitsuki - SuKi
Grandmere (Fuzuki) - Tali
Wakaoji - Shadowkoda
Eichi - LxxK
Mere adoptif de Eichi - May
Takuto - strikernofear
Meroko - mewwinxmelody
Juge 1- Shadowkoda
Femme 2 - Rikka
Madoka - Tali
Annonceur - Shadowkoda
Juges 2-3 - Shadowkoda
Extras - SuKi
- mewwinxmelody
-LxxK
-Tali
-Rikka
-May




SFX: Sounddogs, homemade
Music: FMWS OST 1, 2 (New Future Karaoke vocal-removed in Goldwave)
New Future French Lyrics: Lycoris

[SuKi]

Mes parents arretait pas de me chialer apres parce que je passe trop de temps sur l'ordi maintenant.

mmmmmmmm, c'est ma faute mmyeah, je ne peux pas lire. sorryyyyyagainnn! *dies*

ITS SO CUTE! I LOVE ITTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!

Mitsuki - SuKi - BAH, YOU SUCK! GO HOME! Seriously, where do you get off with mic quality like that? Get off your ass and get a job so you can buy yourself a decent mic. There were some pretty nasty notes in that song, and i'm not even GOING into how OLD you sound! Honestly, these people.

Grandmere (Fuzuki) - Tali - Cool tone, you had a really good low, deep, omfgshesscaryyy sound. Great for the character ^^

Wakaoji - Shadowkoda - YAYITSSHADOWKODA! You drop my jaw every time I hear you - your range is RIDICULOUS. It's just so wide, and so clearly transitioned, it's amazing. ROCK ONNNNN!! ^^

Eichi - LxxK - Ummm, I think I audibly sighed. A lot. That was one sexy 13-year-old. I wish you had more lines in that part, your voice was so smooth and ahhhhhhhhh. -^^- I'd Eichi that kun anyday Great job! *hitsrewindshamelessly*

Mere adoptif de Eichi - May - For the one line, you were very, very natural. I could tell you weren't trying too hard with the accent, or acting the meaning - it just rolled for you. Very, very nice.

Takuto - strikernofear - Awww, he's such a sweetheart! I love Takuto! And you made him such a nice character, i was like CAN I HUG YOU? KTHANKS. And you made him pretty dimensional with your acting, your intonation was incredible. Very good feeling. Yayy. ^^

Meroko - mewwinxmelody - YOU. ARE. SO. CUTE. I think I squeed. The character was perfect - you were just all over the place and completely shameless, which is so totally Meroko. I LOVED it. One of my favorite voices in this. GREAT job.

Juge 1- Shadowkoda - I heard this and it made me happy. I was like C'EST LE LUTINNN! I love this voice. SO MUCH. ^^

Femme 2 - Rikka - Haha, very nice! Your accent's really pretty. ^^

Madoka - Tali - wow, way to go on the voices there - I didn't even know that was you until I read the castlist just now. I never would've guessed you were the same as the grandmother - VERY nice job. way to go.

Annonceur - Shadowkoda - YAYSHADOWKODA!

Juges 2-3 - Shadowkoda - YAYSHADOWKODA! (that goes for a total of. . . 5 voices? mmmyeah. You're life.)

Lycoris - I deeply, DEEPLY apologize for my TERRIBLE mic quality. The later lines I did for you had better quality, and I know now that that's because I didn't raise the volume on those, but at least I know now. I'm SO SORRY. Nice job mixing, especially the background noise, that was like the most solid, perfect sfx ever. There were parts here and there whent the audio effects didn't mesh with the quality, butt that would be my fault. Nice job altogether, very solid ^^ Andddd you're pretty much best producer ever. No lie.

YAYFMWSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!111!!!11ichi!!!! ^_________^

[mewwinxmelody]

Je l'aime tellement!!! Wow! Everyone did so awesome!!!
Je vais l'envoyer à mon prof pour qu'elle peut l'écouter. xDD

[Lycoris]

SuKi:: hey don't beat yourself up over a tiny quality issues XDD. You did great ^^. And, uh, I thought you already had a job? lol. Thanks for the loooong critique! I agree with you wholeheartedly on everything. And... me? the best producer ever? Hehe, I'm flattered >^^<. I'm sure I've still got lots to learn!

mewwinxmelody:: thanks! I'm glad you like it!! And... you're going to send it to your teacher? (French teacher, I'm guessing?) AWESOME. If she gives you any feedback, let us know!!!

[Tali]

It's up! Yay. I am so glad!

Mitsuki - SuKi- Even though I'm not fluent in french and therefore find it hard to understand every line your emotion in your lines conveys a lot. Your singing is so sweet and strong. Your quality wasn't amazing but I only noticed this in a couple of lines for the most part it was good. I really like you as Mitsuki and can't wait to hear you in the next chapter.


Grandmere (Fuzuki)/Madoka - Tali N/A - My quality was horrible. i will defiantely have to be more careful in the future. Apart from that I'm not gonna critique myself.

Wakaoji - Shadowkoda-He sounds smart and sensible, not to old and not too young. I really thought your voice suited the character.


Eichi - LxxK-Oh my God ! It's like Eichi in french. the tone, the pitch everything. i think this is my fave Eichi on the VAA. Perfect!

Mere adoptif de Eichi - May-You didn't have a big part but you delivered your line well and your accent sounded like a real french woman.

Takuto - strikernofear-I really think you a did a completely believable performance. loved it and I can't wait to hear more from you.

Meroko - mewwinxmelody- Wow i really enjoyed your performance. lively is an understatement. Meroko is one of my favourite characters from this series and you really did it justice. You also do shouting lines really well which may not sound like much but is something I've noticed other people struggle with especially when doing an accent!

Juge 1/2/3- Shadowkoda- These voices made me laugh so much. You as the judges was fantastic. You made them all sound different and seperate and none of them had a boring voice.

Femme 2 - Rikka- Well done! Liked your part.

Annonceur - Shadowkoda- You had so many roles but it didn't come off as repetitive even though you were playing nearly all the male characters.

Lycoris- I'm so amazed at how quickly you mixed this. it's always really sad when promising productions disappear completely so I was so excited this got finished. For your first attempt at mixing this was really good. At times i felt you coukd've cutt he lines a little better so there wasn't as long a pause between lines. Also in the sudition room the crowd were amybe a bit too loud, sometimes i found it hard to hear Mitsuki. Apart from that I thought the music was done really well and the casting was amazing. You did so well i couldn't believe it was your first production so i'm reeally looking forwar dto future projects!

Well done to everyone. This was an extremely cool project!

Oh and thanks for the comments Suki. i was really worried about the voices sounding too similar so that was great to hear...I mean read!

[LxxK]

Hum, I've never seen FMWS, but here are my impressions:

Mitsuki-SuKi: I think you did a nice job. I especially like the emotion you put on it. Ah et vachement adorable! =)

Grandmere-tali: It was realistic xD
Such an authoritarian old lady, I don't want to be at mitsuki's place ><

Wakaoji-Shadowkoda: It sounds Wakaoji is very close to mitsuki, like a relative 0o
Well done ^^

Eichi: I don't know if it's good or not, but I found it hard to do xD
It was kind of hard to speak in that way: slowly and clearly ><
(vive les virgules! xD)

Mere adoptif d'eichi-May: Han! euuuuh mais dis moi maï <<
Il me semblait que t'etais censée envoyer une replique un peu plus longue! xD
Rofl, tu l'as pas fait finallement (te parles plus ><)
Enfiiin bref, belle replique =)

Takuto-Strikernofear: It was really good, apart form that I have nothing to say

Meroko-mewwinxmelody: kawaii *.*
T'as vraiment jouer le role à merveille je trouve, t'y as mis du coeur. C'est choupi! ^^

Juges: The voices were very different 0o
Even though some of them sounded a little bit exagerated, I think you did great! =)

Annonceur: He sounds sooo tired 0o

Madoka-Tali: T'as vraiment réussi a differencier les deux voix, mais j'ai quand même, un ptit faible pour la voix de la grand mere >< (if you want me to translate into english, I'll do it ^^')

Femme 2-Rikka: Kyaaah xD
I love this kind of accent ^^

Lycoris: Hum then, vraiment bon mixing ^^
Les effets etaient plutot biens je trouve. La scene de course poursuite etait vraiment funny xD
Et j'ai vraiment esquissé un sourire, d'ailleurs, lorsque t'as le juge 1 qui dit
"je passe au toilette" et qu'on lui reponds "bon courage" xDD
Maiiiis euuuh 0o
J'ai vraiment eu envie de dire LOL qd j'ai entendu la musique que t'as mis en background pour mes repliques
Ca semblait siii romantique, t'aurais dû me le dire, je me serai appliqué pour etre en mode "love love" xD

Hum, by the way, who did "Tanaka-san"? 0o


SuKi: euuuh xD
I didn't understand all that you wrote, buuut thx ^^'
cours chercher le dictionnaire et le feuillete *.*

Tali: Eichi in french? xD
Not sure, but thx ^^

[SuKi]

Mitsuki-SuKi: I think you did a nice job. I especially like the emotion you put on it. Ah et vachement adorable! =)

Merci!! ^^ Je suis reconnaissant pour cela, d'un locuteur natif. Mon accent n'est pas toujours juste, et cela me fait timide de temps en temps >_< Mais, merci! ^^

SuKi: euuuh xD
I didn't understand all that you wrote, buuut thx ^^'
cours chercher le dictionnaire et le feuillete *.*

Haha, sorryyy! *dies* Essentiellement, ta voix est vachement sexy. [/awkwardSukimessage]

[LxxK]

Kyaaaaah xD
Hum, what should I say ? ><

*Imagination de LxxK*

[mode Suou Tamaki]: Ne t’en fais pas, malgré ce coté timide qui a fait ta réussite et que tu rechignes tant, j’ai tout de même pu savourer chacune de tes paroles, lesquelles me sont allées droit au cœur.
Et si ma voix a un coté sexy, c’est pour que mes sentiments atteignent mieux ton cœur. =)

*erf non pas ça, reprends son serieux*



Ahem xD



Ben tu sais, pour le coté timide, Mitsuki is supposed to be 12.
So it doesn't sound weird to be shy for this role =)

And xD
What I didn't understand is

I'd Eichi that kun anyday Great job! *hitsrewindshamelessly*

(especially the "*hitsrewindshamelessly*", it wasn't on the dictionary ><)

It must have been something funny, I think xD

[SuKi]

Et si ma voix a un coté sexy, c’est pour que mes sentiments atteignent mieux ton cœur. =)

Haha, comme c'est vraiment profund à toi! Mais, merci pour tes paroles. ^^

And it wasn't that funny, it was just my idea of a corny joke "Je ferrais 'eichi' à ce 'kun' en tout temps" et "appuyerimpudemmentlatoucherembobinage" PP
How long have you been learning English?
Mmyeah, je vais t'envoyer pm. . .

[Lycoris]

Tali:: Hehe, since I'm on summer vacation right now, and, I don't have much else to do, I make it a point to at least accomplish something XDD. Besides, I enjoyed mixing this a lot ^^, like you said, everyone was amazing. Hmm, you're right, Mitsuki's lines were pretty quiet sometimes- I'll have to be more careful about background noise sometimes. And the pacing for the lines, >.< yep. Some of them did sound sorta cut off/overlapping.
Thanks for the critique~! (apart from the slight quality problem, you performed very well ^^)

LxxK:: Bon, il etait temps que tu reponds XDD. sorry I didn't reply your email yet. J'aime trop ton Eichi!! Je ne sais pas si tu a deja entendu l'original, mais ta voix le resemble TELLEMENT. Like Tali said, its like the French Eichi. If Eichi's seiyuu could speak French, HE WOULD SOUND EXACTLY LIKE YOU. XDD.
Puis pour la scene du poursuit, c'est moi qui a fait les pas de Mitsuki (en tappant sur un bureau). C'etait la seul scene dans laquelle j'ai fais des SFX.
Et pour repondre a ta question: C'est moi qui a fait Tanaka-san XDD. (I noticed no one critiqued that, so I guess it was hard to notice? lol.)