First Demo Ever

[Sarah S]

So now that I have a new mic, I attempted to finish my demo, and here's what I've got. Please note, that I do not have a sound pop shield yet, so yes I know the areas where the air hits the mic, those I will redo later when I have one:

Sakura - Naruto
Mad Dangerous Lady
Sweet Little girl
Little Kid
Hero Girl
Lust(From FMA)-like demon
Winry-ish
Evil Spooky Person

http://media.putfile.com/First-Demo-19

It's about a minute long, and I tried to make sure that I didn't have similar voices next to each other. Critical critiques are very much wanted as fluff won't help me get better.

[Mochan]

You puff a lot, try to stay away from that. I think you're kind of over acting. None of the voices really sounded natural to me. You could tell you were trying, but it was just too much. I think I liked your evil characters the best just because they were real mellow and you seemed to get those characters down just right.
Just try toning the acting down a bit and I think you could be really great!