Yuki, Muon, Madobe Nite - The Melancholy

[Whatocean]

This is strictly experimental.
;p

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNMtp6WyFjI

EDIT (070802): Yuki's speech parts in the song.

(umidasarete kara san nen kan, watashi wa zutto sou yatte sugoshitekita.)

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(kono ginga wo toukatsu suru jouhoutougou shinentai ni yotte tsukurareta
tai yuuki seimeitai CONTAKUTO you HYUUMANOIDO INTAAFEISU ... sore ga watashi)

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(kiki ga semaru toshitara, mazu...anata)

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(saisho kara watashi shika inai. jouhou no dentatsu ni sogo ga hassei suru kamo shirenai.
demo kiite. sore ga watashi ga koko ni iru riyuu. anata ga koko ni iru riyuu.
...shinjite)

Off to bed....

[Erica]

For an experiment, that was pretty good~ And I always love seeing the subtitles in Japanese and English for some reason.

I absolutely adore this song and need to get around to recording it. Would it be too much to ask you to write Yuki's dialogue out in Romanji for me? >.< I wanted to record those parts as well ._.

[Hitomi-Chan]

Very good In say~ I would love it even more if you could do the speaking parts but, Hey who can ? Awsome job~

[Pochi]

I like this song! I remember listening to it yesterday for the first time. XD

Your voice is cool. :`D And I don't hear guys sing girl songs all that often. I think you sound kind of shaky in some parts. Or maybe I'm just putting the volume up too loud. *_*;

[Ishi]

cool, I was waiting for someone to sing this. (I tried it and...wasn't that good XD).
your voice fits here, but when the song/notes goes down (the middle part that is always repeated like e.g. "you are star") your voice is kinda faint and maybe shaky.
I love the chorus esp. though!
(and I also haven't figured out all of the talking yet...only that it appears in one of the firts eps *lol*)

*two thumbs up*

[Whatocean]

Everyone, thank you!

I've had this song on replay in my mind for the past several months. I had to do it.

I know I'm shaky a lot. This song can be crazy hard.

Erica, I'll get the Yuki speech to you somehow.

Everyone else has been doing cool songs lately. I think I'll be experimenting with a whole lot more in the future. ;p

[andy ichigo]

I thought that you did very well on this one. Very good pronounciation as well.

[Whatocean]

Thank you so much! ^_^
Haven't heard from you in a while.

[Ciel]

Hey Whatocean! XD

Very cool to hear a guy sing this song ^_^b W00t for more guy singers! I took the time to listen to the original version of the song... Though this song is originally sung higher in pitch, you did a great job in lowering the pitch so that it was comfortable for you to sing! And as Erica mentioned above, thanks for taking the time to put up both the Japanese kanji lyrics and the English translation! Very nice of you XD

Overall, you sang the song really well! You have a great singing voice, and your pronunciation was dead on (and I salute to you because this is a pretty fast song! XD). You sang very clearly! When the chorus began with line "Watashi nimo tada hitotsu no ganbou ga moteru nara...," I sensed a lot more energy in your voice here! Great job! Hmm, in the beginning, I noticed that you went too low for this one note when you sang the line: "Maiorita I WAS SNOW" And let's see...another thing: I know that in the original song, there were echo effects on Yuki's voice. May I suggest that you try adding some special effect to your vocals, like in the original? XD I think it would sound pretty cool if you did!

Sorry for being nitpicky, but I really hope this critique helps! Again, awesome job!

[Whatocean]

That's a cool suggestion.
I might try that later. ^_^

I have the Yuki speaking parts in the first post for Erica and centimetre.