[Poem] The Start of Change.

[Tali]

This poem could've been better I feel but I'm too lazy to stick at it. Anyway here it is. comments and criticism are extremly welcome.

The Start of Change

I've nothing to say.
Not like there's any way,
I might change the world I'm stuck in.
As the bumper sticker says, "Just keep on truckin'".

We all know the dark side of life.
See thousands of people trapped in strife.
Some challenges just seem far, far too great.
If we could even solve the problem is it already too late?

My life ain't perfect.
I like to think it's worth it.
But I shy from helping, doing anything to be remembered.
Guess i'm scared of being laughed at or even dismembered.

I wish I was brave.
Wish I didn't so easily cave..
Lead by example, isn't that the only way,
To create a brighter, hopefilled day?

I've something to say.
Prehaps there's a way.
To change the world I get to live in.
As the optimist might say "improvement will come from beli'vin'".

[Kage-Ichihashi]

That's a beautiful poem. I like the usage of contemporary slang in something so deep because it shows that this feeling that so many people have had throughout all of the years this earth has existed is still existant today. Wonderful job.

[Tali]

Wow thanks so much for your comment!