Mermaid Melody 6 Mermaid KODOU

[Lemon Ice]

Well I had started this project about 4 or 2 months ago, and I had alot of problems with my computer, the cast was AMAZING~! They got their lines on so fast so, Thanks! ^_^

So I didn't really mix this at my best and I'm waiting on the understudy part to be casted, before I bump this. Sooo that version will be up soon!

Please keep rude comments to yourself! Constructive Criticism only please!

Cast In Order of hear-rance
Coco: Mermaid_Coco
Noel: SiriusFan17
Karen: lemon_ice
Luchia: x0Michellex0
Lina: Shika Megumi
Hanon: Suky

Stream: Putfile
Length: 1:52
Mixing: lemon_ice

When people comment. I will post my critque later.

[Meco]

I suck at critiques.

Coco(Me): It wasn't my best performance, even though I suck in all. -.-'
Stupid cold, so like I think I was too high for Coco.

Noel(SiriusFan17): It was good, but I think that it was maybe too low for Noel.

Karen(lemon_ice): I liked your Karen a lot, but I think that it needed to go a little higher and it needed the nasally tone of Karen.

Luchia(x0Michellex0): Your Luchia voice is totally perfect as always. But, maybe you needed a little more emotion.

Lina(Shika Megumi): You are so good at Lina. No complaints.

Hanon(Suky): Your mic quality isn't the best, and I could barely hear you when Luchia, Hanon and Lina sing together. You also need a little more emotion.

Mixing: It was good.

Overall: 4.5/5

[Tiramisu]

Wow! This is really cute x3 Not a very big MMPPP fan, so I can't really tell who is who, but... ummm... the mixing was really good, harmony was good too ^^ Some parts were a LITTLE too loud, but that's fine. -can hardly hear anyways- xD; Everything was timed nicely as well. Great job!

[Lemon Ice]

Thanks for the critques ^^

Wow! This is really cute x3 Not a very big MMPPP fan, so I can't really tell who is who, but... ummm... the mixing was really good, harmony was good too ^^ Some parts were a LITTLE too loud, but that's fine. -can hardly hear anyways- xD; Everything was timed nicely as well. Great job!

lol Thanks, I had a hard time with volume levels 0__o every body sent there recordings in all weird either it was to loud or to quit. I tryed my best to get every one of the right volume level. It just didn't work with my bad sense of mixing XD, but thanks for the critque and I'm glad you liked it ^^

[Shika Megumi]

Lol, I thought this was a visual. XD

lemon_ice: I heard some improvements on pitch, but it tended to go flatter as the song progressed. You had Karen's nasally quality down well, but perhaps try to keep the highness in pitch up throughout the song.

x0Michellex0: WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ I really like your Luchia voice, Michelle :3 . There could have been a bit more energy, but other than that no complaints.

Suky: Really cute! *-* Perhaps sing with more energy/confidence? Were you the one doind the harmonies, btw? :3

SiriusFan17:

Mermaid_Coco:

Shika Megumi:

Mixing: I thought it was mixed really well. =D Except that I had to turn my volume up really high...>_>"

I'M SORRY, I have to go now, but I will finish the critique later! I only critiqued the individual voices I recognized at first. ^^;;

[Suky]

Lol, I thought this was a visual. XD

lemon_ice: I heard some improvements on pitch, but it tended to go flatter as the song progressed. You had Karen's nasally quality down well, but perhaps try to keep the highness in pitch up throughout the song.

x0Michellex0: WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ I really like your Luchia voice, Michelle :3 . There could have been a bit more energy, but other than that no complaints.

Suky: Really cute! *-* Perhaps sing with more energy/confidence? Were you the one doind the harmonies, btw? :3

SiriusFan17:

Mermaid_Coco:

Shika Megumi:

Mixing: I thought it was mixed really well. =D Except that I had to turn my volume up really high...>_>"

I'M SORRY, I have to go now, but I will finish the critique later! I only critiqued the individual voices I recognized at first. ^^;;

Yes, I was doing the harmonies.=P Wasn't very good though.

[Lemon Ice]

Okay here is my critque. I would like to say thanks to guys for doing this ^^

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Coco/Mermaid_Coco :: I really like your Coco and I think it is really good!, perhaps next time I noticed that you ended alot of the long notes short. Watch out for that and make sure you sing the whole note instead of stopping short. Pitch wise everything was really good for being sick!

Noel/SiriusFan17 :: I give you big props for not knowing what the heck the show was about and still doing this XD I think your pitch was spot on and you did it very well. I think your voice wasa little to low for Noel it could have been a tad higher, but overall it was really good =D

Karen/lemon_ice :: I agree with Shika on the flatness, I really didn't notice it intill I lsitened to it a little more. I think I could have been higher at that point.

Luchia/x0Michellex0 :: I love your Luchia~! <3 I think you need to work on your High notes a little more. Your voice tends to crack some time through out the song and through out the song you could have had a little more emotion.

Lina/Shika Megumi :: Meepah~! I'm in love with your voice =0 It really does suit Lina very well and I have nothing to critque.

Hanon/Suky :: Your voice is sooooo cute~! and I think that was cool when you added the Harmonies. I don't know if you ment to do it or not, but it sounded really good ^^. I agree with what every one else said. You need to sound mroe confident and have somemore emotion. I think it was a little to childish for Hanon mady a tad more mature.

Mixing/lemon_ice :: This was the first time I ever mixed a 6 person song. I think that it was okay I wasn't aware that I had my laptop's volume turned all the way up. that's why it came out so quite >.> and Suky's lines were noticable when they sing all together. It's just the quality in her mic made her sound bubble and weird. The end part was off I could have edited the end so the Harmony! Part started all together.

[x0Michellex0]

Coco - I'd have to say a little lower and a tad bit more mature. You make a pretty good Coco other than that. ^^
Noel - It sounds a bit low, a little sweeter and higher.
Caren - I've never heard your Caren before, but I'd have to say a lot higher. And more of that snobby tone she has.
Lucia - Beh. xP More energy. My voice cracked twice too. XD
Rina - I love your Rina. :] But your quality sounds weird. D:
Hanon - I like how you did the harmonies, but I really didn't think it fit Hanon. ^-^;; Sorry. But if you wanna go for Hanon higher & more childish.

Mixing - Some parts were a little off and some volume levels were everywhere (but I can't get them right either so... XD) but other than that good. ^^

Overall - 4/5

I thought this was sopost to be a video? XD

[Lemon Ice]

I thought this was sopost to be a video? XD

I sent a e-mail to every one with the link to the thing and the reason why it wasn't a video XD

[Chibi-Moon]

Coco: A bit too a high but it's cute ^-^

Noel: Maybe just a little higher? ^^

Caren: Higher =D

Lucia: More energy~

Rina: Wow, your Rina is awesome!

Hanon: More higher and childish, and sometimes it was hard to hear you ^^;

Mixing: No complaints ^^

Overall: 4.5/5