Onna Kaizoku no Sakusen ~ SeraMyu song

[SMoonEmpress]

Hey guys!

I was just wondering if I could get some feed back on this song I recorded for a SeraMyu singing group I'm a part of. The song is called "Onna Kaizoku no Sakusen" (Strategy of a Female Pirate), and was original sung by the oh so talanted Hikari Ono. If you're interested in hearing the original, just let me know. Hikari-sama is the greatest!
Because no karaoke version of this song exists, I had to make my own, so the quality kind of sucks. I tried hard to make it so you could hear the back-up singers, but now I think that maybe the volume's too high? Hm...

http://fairy-dust.net/StarMaker_Onna...usen_remix.mp3

Please listen and critique! Thank you!

[Liana]

In the beginning, your transition into the fast pacedness of the rest of the song was VERY good. There's some problems when you have to hit really high notes, like wavering a bit or getting quieter. But you're still a lot better than a lot of other singers I've heard. There were a lot of moments in this song where I was very impressed. I have no idea how to point them out 'cause I have trouble even HEARING Japanese properly, nevermind attempting to write down a word I heard and say "You did good with this note!" But um. Impressive parts were there.

[SMoonEmpress]

Thanks so much Liana!
Yeah, I think I had some problems too with some of the high notes. (>.&lt Hopefully with practice my range will improve.
Thank you so much for commenting!

[Katie]

*stares at your icon* 0___0. Is that a PGSM spoiler I see?? XDDD lol Anyway, I listened to this song last night, so I don't really remember much about it except that I know I enjoyed it: you did a very good job. All notes seemed pretty close or dead on to me... in fact, that only thing I could really think of was you sounded a little too feminine for Yaten, but then again... this song is probably sung by StarMaker, and not Yaten, right? In that case, good job! XD

[SMoonEmpress]

Thanks so much Katie!

Actually, this song is sung by Roof Mellow played by Hikari Ono, who also played Sailor Star Maker. Since I'm Songstress Starmaker, I figured it would work! (^_^)
Thanks again!