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[anime_freakx1000]

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[ICD]

this song doesn't really suit my taste but oh well...

i think that u did a fair job nice energy going on there. however, your high notes to me sounded quite strained and some of them were off-pitch. i don't have any suggestions to tackle that coz using head voice would definitely ruin the feel of it.. mm... ^^"

P.S. this song shouldn't really be in the J-POP genre on soundclick..? :S

[CKMel]

WOAH. ENGLISH SONG. XDD

Anywaaay~! As ICD said, great energy! >3... Though I am envious that you can get to those high notes, be careful of straining... Though I do understand that head voice would kind of kill the feel of the song... All I can say is work on expanding your range in your chest voice just a bit further, slowly. If you tackle it too fast and hard, it won't work.
Overall though, nice job! Just wish it was longer XDD

[anime_freakx1000]

@ ICD

Thanks. ^^;;...Sorry about the straining and such.
And, yes, I noticed and changed the genre. ^^ Thanks.

@CkMel

^^....Thanks...Hehe..